Ribbons of Aurora
Beautiful dancing ribbons of Aurora12 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
This makes me think of a dance. As if the sky and the earth were spinning around the dance floor to music only they can hear. The image you have chosen is beautiful.
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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This makes me think of a dance. As if the sky and the earth were spinning around the dance floor to music only they can hear. The image you have chosen is beautiful.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Hi Mia, I love the way you think! :o) I can picture the sky and earth spinning around the dance floor too! LOL Thank you for the great review! :o)
Comment from equestrik
Beautiful visual here in your presentation to go with your write. It is well done for the ten word poem writing prompt. All the best to you in the upcoming contest.
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Beautiful visual here in your presentation to go with your write. It is well done for the ten word poem writing prompt. All the best to you in the upcoming contest.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Hi equestrik, I love making people see beautiful visions in their mind's eye. I'm glad I did that for you! Thank you for the great review!
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Well done!
Comment from Bill Schott
This ten-word poem, Ribbons of Aurora, has the proper word count and creates a beautiful mural of a night sky enchanted with the cloudy lights of heavens gases. Nice.
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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This ten-word poem, Ribbons of Aurora, has the proper word count and creates a beautiful mural of a night sky enchanted with the cloudy lights of heavens gases. Nice.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Bill, You made me smile from ear to ear with this lovely review!!! I was determined to find just the right words to make the poem as magical as the lovely light show. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for the extraordinary review! :o)
Comment from Bonnie Seach
This poem follows the rules. The idea is grand. What a magnificent sight those northern lights are. The adjectives chosen magnify them even more so.
Nice presentation. All the best
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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This poem follows the rules. The idea is grand. What a magnificent sight those northern lights are. The adjectives chosen magnify them even more so.
Nice presentation. All the best
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Hi Bonnie, I tried to find the words that matched the wonder of the Northern Lights. Thank you for letting me know that I did a good job!. My heart is smiling because you enjoyed what I wrote. :o)
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Wonderful! My heart is smiling because you are happy. You did a great job. All the best
Comment from Sharon Davis
This 10 word poem provides the reader with a rich sense of imagery that creates a beautiful picture. The artwork accentuates the picture. Nicely presented.
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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This 10 word poem provides the reader with a rich sense of imagery that creates a beautiful picture. The artwork accentuates the picture. Nicely presented.
Comment Written 11-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Hi Sharon, I know that poetry is all about imagery and tried to think of the most magical words, so your mind's eye would create a lovely image. Thank you so much for the lovely review! :o)
Comment from mobileliz
beautiful, beautiful words, beautiful picture, the word choices are even better than the excellent photo selection ... very romantic finish , the words almost match the pic
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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beautiful, beautiful words, beautiful picture, the word choices are even better than the excellent photo selection ... very romantic finish , the words almost match the pic
Comment Written 11-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Hi mobile Liz. I definitely wanted my word choice to be magical.Thank you so much for letting me know I achieved that. Thank you so much for the lovely review. :o)
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You're welcome
Comment from Wendy G
This is a very lyrical and beautiful short poem accompanied by a lovely image of the ribbons of Northern Lights. Your words are well chosen. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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This is a very lyrical and beautiful short poem accompanied by a lovely image of the ribbons of Northern Lights. Your words are well chosen. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Hi Wendy, Thank you so much for the wonderful review and wishes for the contest ! I'm thrilled you enjoyed the poem! :o)
Comment from T B Botts
Well done! You managed to convey a complete train of thought with wonderful verbal and visual illustrations in just ten words. I live where the northern lights are visible, but I didn't see them at all this winter. My wife did, but they made an appearance long after I'd gone to bed. Great poem.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Well done! You managed to convey a complete train of thought with wonderful verbal and visual illustrations in just ten words. I live where the northern lights are visible, but I didn't see them at all this winter. My wife did, but they made an appearance long after I'd gone to bed. Great poem.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Hi Tom, I've only seen the northern lights twice in my life and nowhere near the intensity that those further north see. Sorry to hear you missed them this past winter Thank you for the wonderful review. I'm thrilled you enjoyed what I wrote! :o)
Comment from DentedSyke
This is almost perfect. I beg you to consider changing the last line to:
"delicately waltzing, over sparkling stardust."
It just makes more sense, and it gives the rhythm a better cadence.
At any rate, this is fine, fine work. Nice job.
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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This is almost perfect. I beg you to consider changing the last line to:
"delicately waltzing, over sparkling stardust."
It just makes more sense, and it gives the rhythm a better cadence.
At any rate, this is fine, fine work. Nice job.
Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the last line. :o) This time I'm going to keep it as it is. That doesn't mean in the future I wouldn't re-think the words I wrote. It means a lot that you wanted to help. Thanks for the great review!
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Of course! You're the author! Thanks so much for your viewpoint. My intent is to help. Cheers!
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I definitely know you were trying to help and that makes your review special in my eyes. :o) Bless You!
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:)
Comment from zanya
Some superb imagery here within this short format of 10 words to describe the phenomenon that is the Aurora Borealis and its sky fest delights -lovely pic
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Some superb imagery here within this short format of 10 words to describe the phenomenon that is the Aurora Borealis and its sky fest delights -lovely pic
Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Hi zanya, I wanted the wording to be as magical as the Northern Lights. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it! Thank you!
