Diet?
I'll try it!13 total reviews
Comment from T B Botts
This was a very entertaining poem. Struggling with weight is no fun. Regardless of what you see on TV testimonials, it's not a one size fits all situation. I pray that you will succeed in your quest. I think the most important thing is to stick with what you've decided and if you fall off the wagon, brush yourself off and get back on. It takes time to put on weight, and it takes time to take it off. Be gentle with yourself.
God bless and keep you.
Tom
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
  |
This was a very entertaining poem. Struggling with weight is no fun. Regardless of what you see on TV testimonials, it's not a one size fits all situation. I pray that you will succeed in your quest. I think the most important thing is to stick with what you've decided and if you fall off the wagon, brush yourself off and get back on. It takes time to put on weight, and it takes time to take it off. Be gentle with yourself.
God bless and keep you.
Tom
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
-
Thank you for this nice review and your kind words...both are appreciated. :)
Comment from Wendy G
This is a well constructed poem written with care so that it flows well and smoothly, with unforced rhyme. It is a topic that many will relate to. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
|
This is a well constructed poem written with care so that it flows well and smoothly, with unforced rhyme. It is a topic that many will relate to. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
-
Thank you for this great review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from mobileliz
A cute fun poem. Says a lot in a few words and is truly a universal message. It really hits a nerve with me. I've lost almost 30 but quit the most of the diet. haven't gained it back, but not lost anymore either. If this is a self-portrait, I wish you well.
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
|
A cute fun poem. Says a lot in a few words and is truly a universal message. It really hits a nerve with me. I've lost almost 30 but quit the most of the diet. haven't gained it back, but not lost anymore either. If this is a self-portrait, I wish you well.
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
-
It is! I'm hoping for the best, just have to stay away from donuts..lol. Thanks so much for this great review. :)
-
you're welcome. Cut the carbs, I lost 28 in 3 months.
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a very cute poem that most of us can probably relate to. I love the picture right from the start, I saw that and burst out laughing. I laughed the whole way through. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
|
This is a very cute poem that most of us can probably relate to. I love the picture right from the start, I saw that and burst out laughing. I laughed the whole way through. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
-
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my poem. :)
Comment from RodG
I like how you describe yourself both before and after you started your diet. I commend you for eating healthy and I hope you see the benefits soon. You chose to write a rhyming poem, but see if you can make your meter more consistent in length.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
 |
I like how you describe yourself both before and after you started your diet. I commend you for eating healthy and I hope you see the benefits soon. You chose to write a rhyming poem, but see if you can make your meter more consistent in length.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
-
Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. I don't really write with meter or any other technical devices in mind. Thank you for your advice though, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
I feel this poem deep within my soul! It's like you know me! You have nailed it on the head with this one. So many people struggle with diets. The most important thing is jumping back on when you fall off. Relatable in many ways. Six stars
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
 |
I feel this poem deep within my soul! It's like you know me! You have nailed it on the head with this one. So many people struggle with diets. The most important thing is jumping back on when you fall off. Relatable in many ways. Six stars
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
-
Thank you for this great review, I'm so glad it resonated with you. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
I love how this is touching and funny. So relatable. I wish you the best of luck on your journey. Keep thinking about your family and stay strong!!!!!
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
|
I love how this is touching and funny. So relatable. I wish you the best of luck on your journey. Keep thinking about your family and stay strong!!!!!
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
-
Thank you for this excellent review, I'm always glad to hear from you. :)
Comment from Sharon Davis
A well structured poem that incorporates the required words seamlessly throughout the piece an enjoyable read, with a rhythm that flows well. Nice presentation.
reply by the author on 11-May-2021
|
A well structured poem that incorporates the required words seamlessly throughout the piece an enjoyable read, with a rhythm that flows well. Nice presentation.
Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 11-May-2021
-
Thank you for such a nice review. :)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem with great use of the suggested words. It has a nice flow and rhyme. Great photo selection to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-May-2021
|
This is a nicely written poem with great use of the suggested words. It has a nice flow and rhyme. Great photo selection to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 11-May-2021
-
Thank you for reading my poem and for your kind words. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is positive write about someone determined to lose weight and be slim, think slim and you'll be slim. A positive attitude helps. There is no nutritional value in a donut! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
|
This is positive write about someone determined to lose weight and be slim, think slim and you'll be slim. A positive attitude helps. There is no nutritional value in a donut! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
-
But they taste so amazing! Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)
-
Do they? Not as tasty as a bowl of strawberries. Ha ha ha x x x
