Bye Bye Biggie
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Fishing For Answers"Young love and old wounds revisited.
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Chilling twist. I'm confused--the intro blurb says he seduced her, then turns out he was knocked out while the others raped her.
The druggy guy seduces Biggie, [Zees=>ZEE'S] young ward.
The sun laid=>LAY on the road
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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Chilling twist. I'm confused--the intro blurb says he seduced her, then turns out he was knocked out while the others raped her.
The druggy guy seduces Biggie, [Zees=>ZEE'S] young ward.
The sun laid=>LAY on the road
Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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Nick seduces Biggie. They are secretly dating. He takes her to a club instead of going to Movies. He goes outside to settle a debt, she interrupts. They threaten to keep her until debt is paid. She begins to scream. They hold her down and beat Nick. They run. Two guys come up and find her with an unconscious Nick. They spook her and she runs....into the night. Lay, not laid. Thanks. Sorry for the confusion I?m new at writing chapters.
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Got it--thanks!
Comment from Ulla
Yes, definitely Norwegian, I agree with you on that one. That was a swift and down to the point chapter, Lin. They got as much information they could and then it was lights out. Wow. Very well written. Now what? Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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Yes, definitely Norwegian, I agree with you on that one. That was a swift and down to the point chapter, Lin. They got as much information they could and then it was lights out. Wow. Very well written. Now what? Ulla:)))
Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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I finished the last chapter. Now I am going to write an epilogue. Thanks for reading. Lin
