Comment from Bonnie Seach

Excellent

This poem follows the contest rules. The artwork supports the idea. The word picture is vivid. The reader will be influenced to see a bar filled with music lovers enjoying guitar players such as Willie Nelson, no doubt. All the best

 Comment Written 10-May-2021

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reply by the author on 11-May-2021

Many thanks

reply by Bonnie Seach on 11-May-2021

Best wishes

Comment from DentedSyke

Good

This is good work, given the very restricted structure with which you have to work. It evokes a Nashville (or Austin) feel, and using the word "strummed" definitely adds flavor to the atmosphere you created. However, the last line felt really limiting. Why just bars? Still, this is good work. You can write well, so keep writing!

 Comment Written 10-May-2021

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reply by the author on 10-May-2021

Tha ks

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

This is a nice little poem and a good entry for this competition. Guitars and music in general are a great way to create atmosphere in a bar and you sun that up nicely here. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day

 Comment Written 10-May-2021

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reply by the author on 10-May-2021

Thanks for your great review