The Medical System
A 25 Syllable Poem2 total reviews
Comment from DentedSyke
Yeah, okay. I was prepared not to like this, but the last line got me. If I were a fish, you would have me flopping on the bank of the river of 25-syllable poems. I did like the first five lines: short, pithy, true. It's the medical labyrinth we are all accustomed to. The last line, though, lays bare all of the inequities in the medical profession, including the cost. I think the poem is fantastic.
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Yeah, okay. I was prepared not to like this, but the last line got me. If I were a fish, you would have me flopping on the bank of the river of 25-syllable poems. I did like the first five lines: short, pithy, true. It's the medical labyrinth we are all accustomed to. The last line, though, lays bare all of the inequities in the medical profession, including the cost. I think the poem is fantastic.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Wow, thank you for this great review. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent poem for the contest
and commentary on the medical system
with a nice touch of alliteration.
Sometimes we need to just heal ourselves.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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This is an excellent poem for the contest
and commentary on the medical system
with a nice touch of alliteration.
Sometimes we need to just heal ourselves.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thank you for your kind words. You're absolutely right about healing ourselves!
