Comment from mobileliz

Excellent

The poem feels like it was written for me. As a new poet I search deep within to find something worthy of the written word. I must be most own worst critic because I seldom feel like it's anything anyone else would want to read.

 Comment Written 11-May-2021

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reply by the author on 11-May-2021

Thanks for your review. If that is the way you feel then you are a member of a very large club.

reply by mobileliz on 11-May-2021

you're welcome

Comment from pharp

Excellent

Mystery Poet,

This is an outstanding presentation, perfect artwork selected. A great 25 syllable poem beautifully written. A most enjoyable read; thanks for sharing; the very best to you in the contest.

Blessings...Portia

 Comment Written 08-May-2021

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reply by the author on 09-May-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from roof35

Excellent

This poem has a lovely message. You followed the rules and penned an excellent entry for the twenty-five syllable poem contest. I like the way you displayed your words. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 08-May-2021

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reply by the author on 08-May-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-You used your 25 syllables
well with a good topic.
-I like the idea of poems
growing in your mind.
-A good concluding section
about how people will
enjoy reading your work.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-May-2021

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reply by the author on 08-May-2021

Thanks for your review. I see writing as a seed that has to grow before its fruit can be enjoyed.

reply by Pam (respa) on 08-May-2021

You are welcome and thanks for sharing in your reply; it is a good analogy.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes, here, the power of poetry is explored, both its creation and ultimate delivery to the reader - and a bond is formed - thanks for sharing this interesting concept

 Comment Written 08-May-2021

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reply by the author on 08-May-2021

Thanks very much for your review.

Comment from Erika Seshadri

Excellent

This is a lovely poem. I can't actually decide which I like more, though... The writing or the color scheme and artwork. It's absolutely gorgeous.

Well done!

 Comment Written 08-May-2021

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reply by the author on 08-May-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you like both, although it comes out differently on the phone than on computer.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

This is good and I do understand finding that place within you were muse and talent meet. When I read this I instantly enjoy the premise. I do think it would be more memorable if the flow could rhyme or had a more lyrical tone. But this is good too.

 Comment Written 08-May-2021

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reply by the author on 08-May-2021

Thanks very much for your review.