fickle winds
a 25 syllable poem2 total reviews
Comment from Pj Dennison
Your poem is excellent. Your rhyme scheme is great as well as your meter which is consistent throughout the poem. I enjoyed the images that I saw in my mind of the wind blowing the leaves out of the tree and they float down swaying as if dancing the waltz. The artwork goes so well with your poem.
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Your poem is excellent. Your rhyme scheme is great as well as your meter which is consistent throughout the poem. I enjoyed the images that I saw in my mind of the wind blowing the leaves out of the tree and they float down swaying as if dancing the waltz. The artwork goes so well with your poem.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thanks for the encouraging review.
I hope that you are having a great weekend,
cheers, j
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You are welcome!
Comment from lancellot
This is very nice. I counted and you do have exactly twenty-five syllables. Yes, when the wind blows leaves around the yard, it does resemble a dance. Nature's way of giving us a show. Good idea for the contest and well done on translating the scene into words.
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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This is very nice. I counted and you do have exactly twenty-five syllables. Yes, when the wind blows leaves around the yard, it does resemble a dance. Nature's way of giving us a show. Good idea for the contest and well done on translating the scene into words.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thanks for the insightful review. I hope that you are having a great weekend,
cheers, j
