Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Lin, another great installment that I enjoyed. The driving about was very vivid. At one point you write: 'it was smoothing sailing'. I think the correct saying is: 'it was smooth sailing'. Ulla xx

 Comment Written 08-May-2021

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reply by the author on 08-May-2021

Thanks for catching my error. And thanks for the review. Hope you have a marvelous weekend.

Comment from Leann DS

Excellent

I am really starting to like this guy. He cracks me up. Good job there. Great dialogue. Excellent description. Thank you for sharing this. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs to you.

 Comment Written 08-May-2021

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reply by the author on 08-May-2021

Hugs back to you as well. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

reply by Leann DS on 08-May-2021

Comment from DentedSyke

Excellent

Wow! I wish I had a six-star rating left to give. This is so well written! I love the pithy comments and trenchant observations that Manning makes; this moves the story along in delightful fashion while adding movement to the story. I wish I could write this well. Good job!

 Comment Written 08-May-2021

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reply by the author on 08-May-2021

Thanks for the kind review. I hope to continue learning this craft. (I?m looking up the word ?trenchant?.) Lol. Thanks much.