Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello :)
I enjoyed your 3-5-3 poem for the writing prompt.
It is well written and presented - I like the contrast between silence and deafening. I also like the alliteration of sudden silence.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra

 Comment Written 18-May-2021

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reply by the author on 18-May-2021

Debra,

So pleased you liked my overall presentation. My writing style rarely exceeds 17 syllables for my poems. I like to use FanArt for all my posts .

Comment from irishauthorme

Excellent

Wow, only a 3-5-3 poem, but what a punch! This also how many relationships end(Benn a victim), one half just stops communicating, the other half is left with a broken heart, wondering what happened.
Your illustration was perfect for the rendering, often very hard to find just the right picture.
Good work,
irish

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 Comment Written 18-May-2021

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reply by the author on 18-May-2021

Irish,

THANK YOU for your encouraging review. My style is usually 5-7-5, but I do drop down and write 3-5-3s too. I try to use FanArt for all my posts. Pleased you liked my choice.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Your very short poem describes the suddenness of a romance ending very well. So often one lover leaves without a word or phone call, leaving the other bewildered and broken-hearted.

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 Comment Written 18-May-2021

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reply by the author on 18-May-2021

Very nice review and comments for my 3-5-3 entry. THANK YOU!