My Mind Turns to You
The lil things of loving someone23 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Melissa,
This is a sweet, simple free verse poem of love. It shows how much the simplest things can bring on the strong emotion of love.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Happy Holidays.
Joan
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Hi Melissa,
This is a sweet, simple free verse poem of love. It shows how much the simplest things can bring on the strong emotion of love.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Happy Holidays.
Joan
Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
Comment from Shaka2245
WOW !!! You sure have horned your writing skills. I will be reading a lot of what you penned in the few days. I am trying to get back into my acct.of A TARNISHED KNIGHT and start writing again..Hugs TK
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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WOW !!! You sure have horned your writing skills. I will be reading a lot of what you penned in the few days. I am trying to get back into my acct.of A TARNISHED KNIGHT and start writing again..Hugs TK
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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My my my... my favorite knight has returned!
Thank you for the bling and spending a few moments with lil ol me ❤️
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from scongrove
Fantastic writing my friend :)
I love how your create such loving words to build the intensity of romance. I can tell you are definitely a romantic at heart.
Thanks for sharing.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 11-May-2021
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Fantastic writing my friend :)
I love how your create such loving words to build the intensity of romance. I can tell you are definitely a romantic at heart.
Thanks for sharing.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 11-May-2021
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Hi my lovely friend!! I have missed you!
Thank you for the bling and the oh so sweet review!
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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You are very welcome, my friend!
Comment from Kiara Wiggins
This is a very relatable poem. You captured the essence of the longed-for love through sensory details like touch and smell while using very little words.
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reply by the author on 11-May-2021
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This is a very relatable poem. You captured the essence of the longed-for love through sensory details like touch and smell while using very little words.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 11-May-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written free verse love poem. Nice overall presentation great photo to compliment your words as well. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-May-2021
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This is a nicely written free verse love poem. Nice overall presentation great photo to compliment your words as well. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 11-May-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review of my work!
Always
Justafan
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Is this not the sweetest thing! A lovely gift to the one you love...You covered many of the things I find precious. Having a loving mate is priceless- a true gift from God...You did a great job with this!
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Is this not the sweetest thing! A lovely gift to the one you love...You covered many of the things I find precious. Having a loving mate is priceless- a true gift from God...You did a great job with this!
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Hi there Sherry. Thank you so much for the lightheartedness of this review. It truly made my day.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, like you say, your heart seems to always be evident in everything you write. And, it's always nice to read the words of someone willing to share it all with the honesty and full truth that it takes to be a true writer. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Yes, like you say, your heart seems to always be evident in everything you write. And, it's always nice to read the words of someone willing to share it all with the honesty and full truth that it takes to be a true writer. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Well thank you, Ric. It's always a pleasure reading your reviews.
Much respect
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from harmony13
This is a lovely Love Poem! The author's words are engaging, sweet,
descriptive, and creative. I pondered on the way this author describes
so well the comfort love brings. The poem flows and connects well.
Great Poem! Enjoy the rest of your weekend!....Maria
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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This is a lovely Love Poem! The author's words are engaging, sweet,
descriptive, and creative. I pondered on the way this author describes
so well the comfort love brings. The poem flows and connects well.
Great Poem! Enjoy the rest of your weekend!....Maria
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Hello Maria. I hope you enjoy your weekend as well.
This review brought a smile to my face. Thank you so much for taking a portion of your valuable time to read and leave this lovely review.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from Ulla
Ahhh, missy, what a wonderful love declaration is that. Wherever you are he is never far behind. His smell, the feel of him is everywhere you go. Yes, this is a love poem if I've ever read one. Ulla xx
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Ahhh, missy, what a wonderful love declaration is that. Wherever you are he is never far behind. His smell, the feel of him is everywhere you go. Yes, this is a love poem if I've ever read one. Ulla xx
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Oh my lovely Ulla, thank you so very much for always finding time to read and review my work with such a softness.
Always,
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from DentedSyke
Better than I thought it was on first reading. I re-read it a couple of times to pick up the cadence and flow. This is good writing. I think the last line is totally unnecessary, but this is still a very good piece. It makes one think and it makes one feel; that's the true test, right? Good job! Keep writing, justafan!
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Better than I thought it was on first reading. I re-read it a couple of times to pick up the cadence and flow. This is good writing. I think the last line is totally unnecessary, but this is still a very good piece. It makes one think and it makes one feel; that's the true test, right? Good job! Keep writing, justafan!
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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DentedSyke, you're absolutely right about writing making us "feel". Be it prose or poetry, to be able to draw emotion from a perfect stranger is what we all strive for as writers.
Thank you so much for this wonderful review.
Always
Justafan
Missy
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You're welcome.
