Comment from Bonnie Seach

Excellent

Charming! A restful, soothing lullaby. A haiku 5-7-5 poem is generally supposed to induce feelings; what is hidden in one's depths? Interrogators have been known to use "truth drugs" to unearth, discover facets that are stored in the subconscious. Dig down deep and learn what is hidden in the precincts of a mind and heart.

 Comment Written 09-May-2021

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reply by the author on 10-May-2021

Thanks for the insightful review and thoughts on this one. Nice to sit and wonder. Cheers, j

reply by Bonnie Seach on 10-May-2021

Success to you

Comment from mobileliz

Excellent

Nice story, picture was a good choice, "whisper good night" could be a lover or a child, either way it's a soothing nighttime poem attempting to send the reader into peaceful slumber

 Comment Written 09-May-2021

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reply by the author on 10-May-2021

Thanks for the encouraging review, cheers, j

reply by mobileliz on 11-May-2021

you're welcome

Comment from roof35

Excellent

This is an excellent entry for the five-seven-five contest. Your huckleberry nights let me visualize your scene. Your illustration is interesting. Just a suggestion that a moonbeam scene might have paired well.

 Comment Written 06-May-2021

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reply by the author on 07-May-2021

Thanks for review and good advice. I did change the artwork, looks like Joni Mitchell though, not me, haha
Have a great weekend, cheers. j

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and
good presentation.
-You wrote a very
good poem with good
syllable count and topic.
-Effective imagery in the
first and second lines with
a good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-May-2021

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reply by the author on 07-May-2021

Thanks for the insightful review,
have a great weekend, cheers, j

reply by Pam (respa) on 07-May-2021

You are very welcome, j, and you have a great upcoming weekend, too.