Reviews from
May the Fourth contest entry
2 total reviews
Comment from
Earl Corp
This was hilarious! I could actually see Luke saying that about Yoda also. Especially with the rock lifting exercise. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 05-May-2021
Thank you for the great review, Earl. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from
Kerry L Batchelder
Illustration goes perfect with the wording of the poem. This poem brings about a feeling of disillusionment that this young man must have gone through and the anger he now feels. Good work!
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 05-May-2021
Thank you for the great review and stars, Kerry. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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