A Fish Story
A story about a boy and his grandfather, fishing.16 total reviews
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Awww, this is a super sweet story of a little boy knowing just what to say and do in an adult situation when Papi is having a hard time. Very heartwarming.
Cheers!
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Awww, this is a super sweet story of a little boy knowing just what to say and do in an adult situation when Papi is having a hard time. Very heartwarming.
Cheers!
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from zanya
And it's a wonderful story on so many levels of youth and age especially and the 'miracles' that can indeed happen when we join forces -a tale of love
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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And it's a wonderful story on so many levels of youth and age especially and the 'miracles' that can indeed happen when we join forces -a tale of love
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine tribute to your Father here who was a fine fisherman and suffered from Parkinson's disease. It is hard to watch our loved ones suffer like this, a sensitive write, love Dolly
reply by the author on 05-May-2021
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A fine tribute to your Father here who was a fine fisherman and suffered from Parkinson's disease. It is hard to watch our loved ones suffer like this, a sensitive write, love Dolly
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 05-May-2021
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Thank you, Dolly for this wonderful review. This story is told through the eyes and heart of Noah, my grandson.
Comment from L. Kalere
What an inspiring little story about the love between a child and his grandfather ... a very warm and special relationship. Well written. Best of luck in the contest.
Linda
reply by the author on 05-May-2021
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What an inspiring little story about the love between a child and his grandfather ... a very warm and special relationship. Well written. Best of luck in the contest.
Linda
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 05-May-2021
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I am new to FanStory and this is my first attempt in a competition. Thank you for a wonderful review.
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What a great way to start off! Great job.
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Thank you.
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Thank you. I finished second.
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Congratulations!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Poignant and uplifting--clearly and skillfully rendered from POV of child--heartwarming closer--putting your hands together--clever bit about fish story. Fine work.
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reply by the author on 05-May-2021
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Poignant and uplifting--clearly and skillfully rendered from POV of child--heartwarming closer--putting your hands together--clever bit about fish story. Fine work.
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Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 05-May-2021
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I am new to FanStory and this is my first attempt to compete. Thank you for the confidence I received from your review.
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Welcome to Storyland! Cheers. LIZ
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Thank you.
Comment from T B Botts
What a delightful story. The times when I went fishing with my dad were always very special. I grew to love fishing so much that I made a career of it and still fish to this day. Of course this story is about so much more than fishing. Your grandfather must have been so proud of you, having been such a compassionate child. Good job on this story.
Blessings.
Tom
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reply by the author on 05-May-2021
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What a delightful story. The times when I went fishing with my dad were always very special. I grew to love fishing so much that I made a career of it and still fish to this day. Of course this story is about so much more than fishing. Your grandfather must have been so proud of you, having been such a compassionate child. Good job on this story.
Blessings.
Tom
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Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 05-May-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful review. This is my first try in a competition. BTW, I wrote this as if I were Noah. I'm Papi.
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Well Papi- you did a great job. Well done.
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Thank you.
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Actually, I am the grandfather but I told this story through my grandson's eyes. My father was also a professional fisherman.
