Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

I think yours is the best haiku for this contest, fitting the form correctly while making a skilfully written summary of the Star Wars movies. I hope the voters agree and your entry does well.

 Comment Written 05-May-2021

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reply by the author on 07-May-2021

Thanks for the advice and good luck, it did win.
Have a cosmic weekend, cheers, j

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job with your haiku contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. You adhered nicely to the style of haiku where several in this contest haven't. Your image is a great pairing, although your words paint their own picture for readers. I like the use of these words cosmic, starry, galaxy, as they highlight the theme well. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 04-May-2021

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reply by the author on 07-May-2021

Thanks for the encouraging review Jan. Not a fan of star wars though but I get the gist, haha
Have a great weekend, cheers, j

reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 07-May-2021

Congratulations on your 1st place win! 😊

reply by the author on 07-May-2021

Cheers, j

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-You have written a
very good haiku.
-You describe the drama
in the series well, and
have a very good satori line.
-A good entry; good luck.

 Comment Written 04-May-2021

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reply by the author on 07-May-2021

Thanks for the review, it was a fun write.
Have a great weekend, j

reply by Pam (respa) on 07-May-2021

You are very welcome. It was a very good poem, j.