Bye Bye Biggie
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "The Bad Man VS The Baby "Young love and old wounds revisited.
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Lin, it's really a shame you don't release your chapther for longer. I got my first Jab(Pfizer) yesterday and I was under the weather. Went to bed at 8 pm and slept for 12 hours and I'm fine as ever. Hence I missed this chapter. Things are moving on and so the boy is now home. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 06-May-2021
Hi Lin, it's really a shame you don't release your chapther for longer. I got my first Jab(Pfizer) yesterday and I was under the weather. Went to bed at 8 pm and slept for 12 hours and I'm fine as ever. Hence I missed this chapter. Things are moving on and so the boy is now home. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 06-May-2021
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Glad you got your shot. I got my second one last week. Felt really exhausted for about 12-18 hours, but then okay. Thanks for the review. I don't promote my work any more. I used to spend 50/100 bucks a week promoting my work. No more. If it's any good....people will read. If not...they won't bother. I keep my stuff here for safe keeping. Hugs and kisses to you. Must be nice to live in Spain. Exotic. Bull fights. Toreador?s....men in tight pants. Yum. Lol.
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Hahahaha, yeah, a lovely country to live in. From childhood I always wanted to be here. And now I do. I love my wee house in the mountains. Hugs, Ulla:)))
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Brilliantly graphic depiction of frenetic infant-tending. Rich rendering of Q as a frantic father. Effective ending entices. See you soon!
Biggies=>BIGGIE'S
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
Brilliantly graphic depiction of frenetic infant-tending. Rich rendering of Q as a frantic father. Effective ending entices. See you soon!
Biggies=>BIGGIE'S
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thanks much for continuing to read. I appreciate it.
Comment from Leann DS
Very good chapter. Well written with a sensible order, great dialogue, and nice details. But it is getting sad. Poor baby... But he seems to have love. That's the most important thing.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
Very good chapter. Well written with a sensible order, great dialogue, and nice details. But it is getting sad. Poor baby... But he seems to have love. That's the most important thing.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thanks, I always worry about the order. Much application for reviewing.