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Fox Fine: At the County Clerk 2

a one-scene script with Fox Fine

15 total reviews 
Comment from robyn corum
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Bill,

Very reminiscent of Harvey. Strange, unexplainable events and people who aren't all that they seem... at least for the moment. I feel like, in the end, all will be explained. And if this follows a similar format, I think I have an idea of what's going on. If so, I do love it! So much!

Thanks, you inventive, fun, ingenious fellow!

 Comment Written 04-May-2021


reply by the author on 04-May-2021
    Thank you, Robyn, for the generous and kind review. Bill
Comment from royowen
Excellent
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Ha ha,, I like that. Lori Oppenheimer is seven foot tall, hmm. I love the circular conversations that go on between the characters, as the plot, like curdled milk, gets thicker and thicker.well done Bill and excellent script, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 04-May-2021


reply by the author on 04-May-2021
    Thank you, Roy.
reply by royowen on 04-May-2021
    Bless you
Comment from Jay Squires
Excellent
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Ok-ay! I like the direction you are taking this play. Lori is somehow connected with his lost Pooka. There is something supernatural happening for sure. This should garner quite a following, Bill!

 Comment Written 04-May-2021


reply by the author on 04-May-2021
    Thank you for the kind review, Jay.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent
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Lori, well I did not see that coming, last scene I thought doppleganger, I still like the confusion in the name Oppenheimer, very well written and I look forward to more****kahpot

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 Comment Written 04-May-2021


reply by the author on 04-May-2021
    Thank you, kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. Wait, so Lori is his pooka? Or his pooka is a shapeshifter and can take up any form. I'm guessing that the pooka is planting some ideas in Fox's brain so that he will eventually ask Lori/Lois to marry him?

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 Comment Written 04-May-2021


reply by the author on 04-May-2021
    Polkas are unpredictable I am told.