Cabbage
a 2-4-212 total reviews
Comment from Chrissy710
Ha ha Bill You are so right a great 2.4.2 congrats on the win a clever entry from a clever writer who thinks outside the square
Cheers Chris
I do like a nice slaw
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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Ha ha Bill You are so right a great 2.4.2 congrats on the win a clever entry from a clever writer who thinks outside the square
Cheers Chris
I do like a nice slaw
Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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Thank you, Chris, for giving this one look. Cole slaw may be the next dandelion as far as poem topics go. : )
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Yes a bit short on topics same old same old
Comment from Debra White
...and carrots and onion and mayonnaise....perhaps a little seasoning?!
I enjoyed reading your 2/4/2 poem. It made me smile and fancy some coleslaw!
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 05-May-2021
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...and carrots and onion and mayonnaise....perhaps a little seasoning?!
I enjoyed reading your 2/4/2 poem. It made me smile and fancy some coleslaw!
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 05-May-2021
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Thanks, Debra
Comment from Erika Seshadri
This is doing really well in the voting booth so far. I think you must have really hit an existential nerve with some people about the inescapable life cycle of a cabbage, lol.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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This is doing really well in the voting booth so far. I think you must have really hit an existential nerve with some people about the inescapable life cycle of a cabbage, lol.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thank you, Erika. Who knew?
Comment from Wendy G
Lovely image and it is accompanying a very original and creative piece of writing, short though it is. Your poem has a message for us all - there is potential for a greater calling, a more pleasing outcome. Good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Lovely image and it is accompanying a very original and creative piece of writing, short though it is. Your poem has a message for us all - there is potential for a greater calling, a more pleasing outcome. Good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thank you, Wendy
Comment from Dr. Nad
This very simple yet very profound piece reminds us that life is in constant flux and change happens to everyone. It also reminds us that if you don't like what is around you, most of the time, we can decide to perform different actions which will result in different consequences. Also we're reminded that being chopped up, sometimes, gives that spice to life. LOL Thanks for sharing, you got a vote in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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This very simple yet very profound piece reminds us that life is in constant flux and change happens to everyone. It also reminds us that if you don't like what is around you, most of the time, we can decide to perform different actions which will result in different consequences. Also we're reminded that being chopped up, sometimes, gives that spice to life. LOL Thanks for sharing, you got a vote in the contest.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thank you, Doc
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You are most welcome mystery author. LOL
Comment from Mia Twysted
Interesting. It says so much in so little. To use food to show that change is everywhere in nature from its plants to its people. Something has always been something else.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Interesting. It says so much in so little. To use food to show that change is everywhere in nature from its plants to its people. Something has always been something else.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thank you, Mia,
Comment from equestrik
This is clever for sure and a good presentation with the picture to accompany your writing in the 2-4-2 contest. All the best to you in the upcoming contest.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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This is clever for sure and a good presentation with the picture to accompany your writing in the 2-4-2 contest. All the best to you in the upcoming contest.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thank you, equestrik
Comment from Pam (respa)
-It is very nice artwork
and a good presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-I like the formatting of
your poem, too.
-Effective imagery and
good point about cole slaw!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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-It is very nice artwork
and a good presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-I like the formatting of
your poem, too.
-Effective imagery and
good point about cole slaw!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thanks, Pam
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, don't tell everybody as they are secretly eating healthily without realising they are just eating cabbage! I love Coleslaw, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Ha ha ha, don't tell everybody as they are secretly eating healthily without realising they are just eating cabbage! I love Coleslaw, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha I just made some over the week end and it was delicious. You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. The image is perfect, your syllables are correct per line, and your message is clear. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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Haha I just made some over the week end and it was delicious. You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. The image is perfect, your syllables are correct per line, and your message is clear. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 03-May-2021
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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Thanks, Jan
