Comment from tempeste

Exceptional

I missed this timely entry ..I'm quite shocked it did not receive even on vote out of so many given.

Your message is a about a pressing problem ..

Good part of the police force is trigger happy towards black people .

I know the streets are full of crime but that doesn't give the police the right to "shoot first ask questions later " though.

And not every person of colour is by definition a bad person, a law breaker .which is how most police offices think sadly.

The police officer that killed Floyd is behind bars ..

.. a year has past yet nothing much has changed.

 Comment Written 08-May-2021

Comment from Bonnie Seach

Excellent

The artwork depicts and the poem 'explicts' . The theme is surprisingly refreshing. The poem fits the format requirement of 2 - 4 - 2. Well done. Success to you

 Comment Written 04-May-2021

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Very well said, yes I'm not sure ho one mistakes a tazer for a gun, far, far to much of this going on, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kagpot

 Comment Written 03-May-2021