Comment from royowen

Exceptional

I think these two well be in love, isn't that the definition of love, it sparks the creative, the inspiration that makes one wonder about themselves, that someone unattainable makes themselves available to us. This is a perfect chapter about that subject, yes beauty can be the lighthouse, but it's not the light, beautifully written Shana, an excellent, you deserve to a famous writer, wonderful job, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 03-May-2021

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reply by the author on 03-May-2021

Awww... thank you dear friend :)

And yes, Joseph and Carrie are soul mates. As long as you've known me, you know I will end this story with light and happiness.
I always appreciate your kind words of encouragement. They mean the world to me.

Thanks so much!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 03-May-2021

Well done dear friend

Comment from M white

Excellent

Another wonderfully written chapter in your series. The conversation flows for a natural read. I can picture the two characters sitting at the table and talking, with the cut-away to The Shadow, as he interjects. Well done.

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reply by the author on 03-May-2021

Thanks so much, M white :)

Your words are music to my ears. I'm so happy you could follow the scenes. I worry the Shadow's voice will be confusing.

I hope to hear from you again. I appreciate your feedback.
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was an excellent chapter. Easily kept my interest. I like how you are showing how the voice in his mind is impacting his life. The dialogue with Carrie is well written and easy to follow. Great job.

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reply by the author on 03-May-2021

Thanks so much, Michael :)

This is great to hear. I worry the Shadow's voice will be confusing to readers. Your feedback and review made my day!

Thanks again for the encouraging words.
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

I admire your skill in telling a good story. The entire chapter flowed easily from one paragraph to the next. I was intrigued by 'the voice' in Joseph's head. Your dialogue sounds natural. And, this chapter not only held my interest, but it made me want to read more.

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reply by the author on 03-May-2021

Thanks so much, C. Gale Burnett :)

I'm so thrilled you enjoyed the chapter. It is definitely fun to create, especially the Shadow's voice.
I appreciate your kind words and inspiring review. I hope to hear back from you again.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by C. Gale Burnett on 03-May-2021

You are so welcome :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Chapter 61 of the Supernatural Fiction speaks in continuation, about dinner is served, in a thrilling expressively thru a taletelling, and progresses thru a concording plot development, fostered by dialogues and characters realistic, ends with a formal interaction; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

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reply by the author on 03-May-2021

Thanks so much, Alcreator :)

It's so pleasing to hear your kind and inspiring words. I always look forward to your opinion.

Thanks again!
Always a pleasure,
Shana :)

Comment from AJ McCall

Exceptional

I am really, really starting to hate The Shadow EVEN MORE!! How come he can't just leave Joseph alone and let him live his life with Carrie; they're so cute together! It's so hard to believe that Carrie's uncle is the same detective that's looking for Joseph and he has no idea his niece is dating him! It's insane.
And also I don't think I mentioned it but I dipped into some journalism too. I have a certificate.
I didn't spot any typos, so good for you! But...
You can't keep leaving me hanging like that! I need to know what happens! Please post the next chapter soooooon! Can't wait to see what happens next!

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reply by the author on 03-May-2021

Thanks so much, AJ! :)

Wow... what a wonderful review and motivating feedback. I am on cloud nine.
You made my day!
Yes, the Shadow is definitely everyone's villain. Joseph and Carrie are falling in love and all they need is to find out how to rid the evil entity from Joseph. But when Carrie finally learns the truth about Joseph, will she help him or run?
And soon, her uncle will figure things out. It's all got me stressed too. And I'm the one creating all this. Lol!

Stay tuned... I'm working on the next post.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 03-May-2021

Aww, You're welcome! I think Carrie will help him.. maybe, lol. Alright, I'll be patient. :)