"Restorative Appeal"
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Commentary and Philosophy Poetry composed a short story speaks about the Creation of the Universe, according to the Bible, the Heavenly Father created the Earth in six days and He took a rest on the seventh day; well said, not well done; your post is illegible, the colour of font and the size of the font and the background colour mismatch; I tried hard to change everything to make your post readable; I never find any worth why a writer does not think about legibility of his or her work posted, only self-satisfaction, self-joy, self-pride is not enough, one should think of a reader's joy or pleasure for there is no worth achieved by placing or sharing an excellent or exceptional post in illegible order; anyway, thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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This Commentary and Philosophy Poetry composed a short story speaks about the Creation of the Universe, according to the Bible, the Heavenly Father created the Earth in six days and He took a rest on the seventh day; well said, not well done; your post is illegible, the colour of font and the size of the font and the background colour mismatch; I tried hard to change everything to make your post readable; I never find any worth why a writer does not think about legibility of his or her work posted, only self-satisfaction, self-joy, self-pride is not enough, one should think of a reader's joy or pleasure for there is no worth achieved by placing or sharing an excellent or exceptional post in illegible order; anyway, thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 03-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thanks ALCREATOR.
Always,
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Earl Corp
This was a great poem. You have a Very positive message connected to it. This should have been a contest entry. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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This was a great poem. You have a Very positive message connected to it. This should have been a contest entry. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 03-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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I appreciate that Earl as always,
Doctor Ricky1024
