Democracy At Stake
We and all the world are in deep trouble46 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
You are so right, Jay. The whole world is in Trouble with a capital T.
You make some excellent points but bring us back to a hopeful conclusion.
Very well done.
Blessings
Janet
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You are so right, Jay. The whole world is in Trouble with a capital T.
You make some excellent points but bring us back to a hopeful conclusion.
Very well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 02-May-2021
Comment from harmony13
The author's point of view is well stated. Yes we need to find some
solutions NOW! The author's words are strong, information, have
meaning and are creative. I found these words filled with important
situations to review. The poem flows and connects well. Great poem!
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The author's point of view is well stated. Yes we need to find some
solutions NOW! The author's words are strong, information, have
meaning and are creative. I found these words filled with important
situations to review. The poem flows and connects well. Great poem!
Comment Written 02-May-2021
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 02-May-2021
Comment from eliz100
I enjoyed reading your poem especially because it flowed well. I totally agree with the message. Even with the pandemic the rich got richer and the poor poorer.
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I enjoyed reading your poem especially because it flowed well. I totally agree with the message. Even with the pandemic the rich got richer and the poor poorer.
Comment Written 02-May-2021
Comment from equestrik
I enjoyed your write here and truly appreciate your ability to not only rhyme your verses but to also state these disturbing issues and yet bring us back to hope in the end.
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I enjoyed your write here and truly appreciate your ability to not only rhyme your verses but to also state these disturbing issues and yet bring us back to hope in the end.
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Comment Written 02-May-2021
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
Yes! I so agree with you! There are many things amiss right now, and you've named many of them in your poem, which flows well and create a well-penned plea for people to see what's happening and make an effort to turn things around.
Thank you for sharing!
Susan
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Yes! I so agree with you! There are many things amiss right now, and you've named many of them in your poem, which flows well and create a well-penned plea for people to see what's happening and make an effort to turn things around.
Thank you for sharing!
Susan
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Comment Written 02-May-2021
