Autumn Finale
There is beauty in the last days of autumn.4 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your alliteration becomes onomatopoetic. The repetitive letters r and s give a sense of a rolling sound. Others create the sounds of the wind. The hard consonants create a sense of depth and a popping sound. Well orchestrated.
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Your alliteration becomes onomatopoetic. The repetitive letters r and s give a sense of a rolling sound. Others create the sounds of the wind. The hard consonants create a sense of depth and a popping sound. Well orchestrated.
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Thank you for your careful read and your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from mobileliz
The picture was perfect even before I saw the poem. I loved the use of crispy, mosaics, cemetery graves, they added the the feel of fall and colder temperatures. Made me "hear" the crunch of the leaves under foot.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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The picture was perfect even before I saw the poem. I loved the use of crispy, mosaics, cemetery graves, they added the the feel of fall and colder temperatures. Made me "hear" the crunch of the leaves under foot.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
You have captured the beauty of Fall with its unpredictable weather and colored leaves. The sound of leaves crisply breaking underfoot with a cool breeze on a sunny day is the grand finale before Winter sets in. Beautiful poem!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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You have captured the beauty of Fall with its unpredictable weather and colored leaves. The sound of leaves crisply breaking underfoot with a cool breeze on a sunny day is the grand finale before Winter sets in. Beautiful poem!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your read, review and encouraging comments.
Comment from Cleigh115
Wow! What a great poem! And about Fall- my favorite season! I absolutely LOVE that you used the description 'Fashion colorful mosaics on tawny lawns.' What powerful descriptions you have written. I loved the imagery you played. Well done!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Wow! What a great poem! And about Fall- my favorite season! I absolutely LOVE that you used the description 'Fashion colorful mosaics on tawny lawns.' What powerful descriptions you have written. I loved the imagery you played. Well done!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your read and the honor of a six star review.
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you're very welcome!
