A Million Ways
a kyrielle23 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
A beautiful love poem! The poem flows and connects well. The author's
words are uplifting, clear and creative. I pondered on how wonderful
"love displayed in a million ways" feels. The artwork is perfect and
compliments these words. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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A beautiful love poem! The poem flows and connects well. The author's
words are uplifting, clear and creative. I pondered on how wonderful
"love displayed in a million ways" feels. The artwork is perfect and
compliments these words. Have a great day!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Harmony
Comment from dragonpoet
You followed the format well in this poem about showing love in words and actions. The artwork matches well.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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You followed the format well in this poem about showing love in words and actions. The artwork matches well.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Joan
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Any time.
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Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is a well-written Kyrielle. I love the descriptions, of the pureed and sliced time, and the rhyme with, "pureed" of "guaranteed." The other rhymes are good, but not as special.
The repetitive line at the end of each verse, serves the requirement, of the format of the Kyrielle. The love shown by the author is true to form and allows for schedules, and practicing the couple's, faith in God. It has been many years since I was involved as a couple in a committed relationship. Yet, I still have hope that someday, I will be with the one that I love as a couple such as the one written in this Kyrielle.
Thank you for sharing your faith and everlasting love for each other.
Take care,
Jesse
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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This is a well-written Kyrielle. I love the descriptions, of the pureed and sliced time, and the rhyme with, "pureed" of "guaranteed." The other rhymes are good, but not as special.
The repetitive line at the end of each verse, serves the requirement, of the format of the Kyrielle. The love shown by the author is true to form and allows for schedules, and practicing the couple's, faith in God. It has been many years since I was involved as a couple in a committed relationship. Yet, I still have hope that someday, I will be with the one that I love as a couple such as the one written in this Kyrielle.
Thank you for sharing your faith and everlasting love for each other.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Jesse.
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You are very welcome.
Have a nice day,
Jesse
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am not familiar with the form here, but the contest does require metre and this seems to be missing here, but I adore the sentiments, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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I am not familiar with the form here, but the contest does require metre and this seems to be missing here, but I adore the sentiments, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Wendy G
This is quite beautiful. Love displayed in a million ways - what a wonderful focus to live by, thinking of and being alert to showing love in a variety of ways. Beautifully written.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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This is quite beautiful. Love displayed in a million ways - what a wonderful focus to live by, thinking of and being alert to showing love in a variety of ways. Beautifully written.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Wendy
Comment from royowen
You've written a Kyrielle sonnet, the same with just two lines added at the end. Yes, there is nothing more important than the very thing that makes our world go round, love, great rhyming and flow, good repeat last line, and excellent language, well done, good luck, Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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You've written a Kyrielle sonnet, the same with just two lines added at the end. Yes, there is nothing more important than the very thing that makes our world go round, love, great rhyming and flow, good repeat last line, and excellent language, well done, good luck, Blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Roy
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Welcome
Comment from Marigo J. Stathis
Thank you for the nice Kyrielle poem you created and feature here. It's a wonderful tribute to love and its expression, despite the restrictions that time imposes. Time is both foe (on the earthbound plane) and friend (in the great beyond). I am a tad confused as to the second line of the first stanza (i.e., what you mean by "a perfect time of which to speak"). Unless you are referring to having spent so much time with the one you love, that there are so many moments about which one could reminisce. Thank you so much for sharing, and good luck with the contest! :)
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the nice Kyrielle poem you created and feature here. It's a wonderful tribute to love and its expression, despite the restrictions that time imposes. Time is both foe (on the earthbound plane) and friend (in the great beyond). I am a tad confused as to the second line of the first stanza (i.e., what you mean by "a perfect time of which to speak"). Unless you are referring to having spent so much time with the one you love, that there are so many moments about which one could reminisce. Thank you so much for sharing, and good luck with the contest! :)
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Yes. One moment out of many to talk about.
Comment from Sally Law
This is so lovely and loving. I see the priorities here as we must make time for those loving relationships. It stretches into eternity with great rewards.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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This is so lovely and loving. I see the priorities here as we must make time for those loving relationships. It stretches into eternity with great rewards.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Sal
Comment from Sharon Davis
A well written kyrielle that follows the appropriate structure for this poetic style. and conveys a thoughtful sentiment. Nicely presented, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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A well written kyrielle that follows the appropriate structure for this poetic style. and conveys a thoughtful sentiment. Nicely presented, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Sharon
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a perfect entry for the Kyrielle contest. The quatrains flow smoothly with rhythmic repeating lines. Your chosen artwork pairs perfectly. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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This is a perfect entry for the Kyrielle contest. The quatrains flow smoothly with rhythmic repeating lines. Your chosen artwork pairs perfectly. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Thank you, LJ
