Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Bill
A Well written Kryielle with lovely sentiments and yes we need time to reflect and show love to those most dearest to us
Nice image and presentation
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 03-May-2021

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reply by the author on 03-May-2021

Thanks, Chris

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

I love the picture of a long couple. and I love the sentence: Love displayed in a million ways." I agree that love can be expressed in many ways. A kiss, a hug, a joke, a sweet word, a touch, hand in hand etc. are ways to express love. Love is a touchy feeling. I agree with you even a breath is a kind of love expression...

thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-May-2021

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reply by the author on 02-May-2021

Thank you, Chan

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a nicely written kyrielle. It has a Beautiful overall presentation background colour and font choice. Nice photo choice to compliment your words. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-May-2021

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reply by the author on 01-May-2021

Thanks, Joanne

Comment from kmoss

Excellent

I enjoyed this Kyrielle poem! I particularly liked this stanza: Time is somehow sliced and pureed
'til total use is guaranteed;
schedules set so time obeys;
love displayed in a million ways.

 Comment Written 01-May-2021

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reply by the author on 01-May-2021

Thanks, kmoss

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

I like ther analogy of time being sliced and pureed. Your poem rhymed, made sense and it described how you perceive love. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021

Thanks, Earl

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

I hope no one gets confused over this and writes a kyrielle because that is the name of the contest. Only when you get into the small print as you have done do you find that what is wanted is a kyrielle sonnet and thius is an excellent one.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021

Thank you, Jim.

Comment from mobileliz

Excellent

nice story, well written, gives a feeling of love, peace, and forever after, the photo selection added to the overall success of a lovely poem, keep up the good work

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021

Thanks, liz

reply by mobileliz on 30-Apr-2021

you're welcome

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

This is a sweet poem for the 'Kyrielle' contest. The picture with your writing expresses a tender love and does it well. I wish you all the best in the contest and with your writing.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021

Thanks, equestrik

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Love and time squashed in the middle of a conversation. This is a very philosophical entry. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021

Thanks, Iza

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

This is a very good poem that speaks of love in a million ways. I wasn't sure what a Kyrielle even was until now that I've read some of them. Good luck with the contest!
Patty

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021

Thanks, Patty