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An Acrostic- Loop Poem9 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I always enjoy this style of poetry. It is fun to play around with the ending words to make a summary sentence or two. The words repeated usually are the focal words. Supplies (from the) Road, Extracted Wisdom Sought, Negotiates Answers
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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I always enjoy this style of poetry. It is fun to play around with the ending words to make a summary sentence or two. The words repeated usually are the focal words. Supplies (from the) Road, Extracted Wisdom Sought, Negotiates Answers
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Thank you for your very understanding and excellent review, much appreciated
Comment from Benshu-bookgai
A decent amount to unpack from such a brief work, especially with the poem coming across as having a lot to say, and very strict guideline under which to say it. A well done blend of echo and acrostic forms, too.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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A decent amount to unpack from such a brief work, especially with the poem coming across as having a lot to say, and very strict guideline under which to say it. A well done blend of echo and acrostic forms, too.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much, much appreciated
Comment from Patty Palmer
This was quite an undertaking. An acrostic loop poem with the same beginning and end. Great job! I also like the picture of those studious students.
Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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This was quite an undertaking. An acrostic loop poem with the same beginning and end. Great job! I also like the picture of those studious students.
Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 30-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from pome lover
And THAT is a mouthful of answers!
Answers begetting answers.
Good word choices and thoughts.
very nice "Start and ends the same" entry.
Concise and to the point.
Very good.
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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And THAT is a mouthful of answers!
Answers begetting answers.
Good word choices and thoughts.
very nice "Start and ends the same" entry.
Concise and to the point.
Very good.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you, yes it is a mouthful, much appreciated
Comment from Mazipoodles
Very clever poem! Well written and presented, plus food for thought. I enjoyed reading it (several times...). And could work just as well with 'lifelong' substituted. All the best in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Very clever poem! Well written and presented, plus food for thought. I enjoyed reading it (several times...). And could work just as well with 'lifelong' substituted. All the best in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you so very much, and I will look at your suggestion it sounds wonderful
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sharon Davis
A well thought out Loop poem that examines the topic of Answers...the poem flows well and the incorporation of an acrostic style adds to the overall coherence of the piece. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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A well thought out Loop poem that examines the topic of Answers...the poem flows well and the incorporation of an acrostic style adds to the overall coherence of the piece. Nicely done.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Anne Johnston
Very well done, combining an Acrostic and a Loop poem, to fit this contest of a poem starting and ending with the same word. Good picture, and good thought about choosing the answers that meet our needs.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Very well done, combining an Acrostic and a Loop poem, to fit this contest of a poem starting and ending with the same word. Good picture, and good thought about choosing the answers that meet our needs.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you, yes I thought-start end with the same word that a loop was a good choice
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You are welcome
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem meets the rule well, tells a good little story, and is unique in its construction, Mystery Author. There is good flow, the repeated words fit in nicely, and the message is clear. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Your poem meets the rule well, tells a good little story, and is unique in its construction, Mystery Author. There is good flow, the repeated words fit in nicely, and the message is clear. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Pantygynt
the acrostic is fine and your intention to loop this is in line with the prompt but the following need attention:
Typo here: '...answers exracted' => extracted. You have it correct at the start of the next line.
Typo her: '...supply's' => supplies (error repeated in next line)
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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the acrostic is fine and your intention to loop this is in line with the prompt but the following need attention:
Typo here: '...answers exracted' => extracted. You have it correct at the start of the next line.
Typo her: '...supply's' => supplies (error repeated in next line)
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much, typos corrected, many thanks
