Spring's Dewdrop Kiss
The magic of Spring's kiss14 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are comforting, serene, descriptive and creative.
I enjoyed the beauty portrayed in these words. The poem flows and connects well. Thank you for the author's notes - the compliment these
words. Hope you are having a great day!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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The author's words are comforting, serene, descriptive and creative.
I enjoyed the beauty portrayed in these words. The poem flows and connects well. Thank you for the author's notes - the compliment these
words. Hope you are having a great day!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Hi Harmony, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem! Thank you for your lovely review. Spring is my favorite time of year. Helvi
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem for spring, Spring's Dewdrops Kiss, presented in iambic meter and an ABCB rhyme scheme, brings the 'leafy whorls' and all the other delightful sights of spring.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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This poem for spring, Spring's Dewdrops Kiss, presented in iambic meter and an ABCB rhyme scheme, brings the 'leafy whorls' and all the other delightful sights of spring.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Hi Bill, I'm thrilled you felt I caught a lot of the magic of Spring! Thanks for the great review! :o)
Comment from Wendy G
A lovely joyous poem, and a very lyrical one. The contrast between seasons is much more pronounced where you live - it must be splendid! Very well written.
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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A lovely joyous poem, and a very lyrical one. The contrast between seasons is much more pronounced where you live - it must be splendid! Very well written.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Hi Wendy, Lyrical poems are the ones I love to write. Hope this put a little spring in your step! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one Thanks for the great review! :o) Helvi
Comment from Patty Palmer
Very nice and well-written poem about Spring. Not so easy to do when you are not allowed to use the words that usually describe Spring. But, you did it and did it well. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Very nice and well-written poem about Spring. Not so easy to do when you are not allowed to use the words that usually describe Spring. But, you did it and did it well. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Hi Patty, When someone throws a curve ball at you, you definitely have to think. The words to this one just seemed to flow without too much trouble. Thanks for the great review! :o) Helvi
Comment from equestrik
This is truly a beautiful presentation for the 'Poem for Spring' contest. the picture is perfect and goes with your writing perfectly. best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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This is truly a beautiful presentation for the 'Poem for Spring' contest. the picture is perfect and goes with your writing perfectly. best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Hi equestrik, The picture of the apple blossoms was mine. I thought it fit the poem well. I'm glad you liked it as well as the poem. I actually tied for 2nd place in the "Spring Contest"Thanks for the great review! :o) Helvi
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congrats!
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I couldn't have been happier!
Thanks so much for for the congrats!!!! :o)
Comment from Marigo J. Stathis
It's interesting that this poem is written largely in archaic diction, but it seems to work! That's quite a feat, in and of itself. There are a few places that need editing, in my humble opinion. For one, you need punctuation. It will truly help your poem to insert commas, semi -colons and periods, appropriately. The lines, "And birds begin to buld their nests As all of this comes night" contains a misspelling and one too many "Ands". It could be edited to "The best birds begin to build their nests, as all of this comes nigh" (or something like that). Anyway, thank you for bringing beauty into the world re your poetry. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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It's interesting that this poem is written largely in archaic diction, but it seems to work! That's quite a feat, in and of itself. There are a few places that need editing, in my humble opinion. For one, you need punctuation. It will truly help your poem to insert commas, semi -colons and periods, appropriately. The lines, "And birds begin to buld their nests As all of this comes night" contains a misspelling and one too many "Ands". It could be edited to "The best birds begin to build their nests, as all of this comes nigh" (or something like that). Anyway, thank you for bringing beauty into the world re your poetry. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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Thanks for all the help it really was appreciated! On top of the help you offered, I was happy to see you enjoyed the poem. The poem ended up tying another for a 2nd place win! :o) Helvi
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A happy uplifting write about Spring and the fun it can bring, especially when we see the wildlife enjoying the Spring with us, a fun well rhymed post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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A happy uplifting write about Spring and the fun it can bring, especially when we see the wildlife enjoying the Spring with us, a fun well rhymed post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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Hi Dolly , I love making people smile so knowing you enjoyed this poem definitely brightens my day! Thanks for the great review! :o) Helvi
Comment from Boogienights
This is so beautiful. I'm in this contest as well, but your poem will be hard to beat. The rhyming is lovely and descriptive. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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This is so beautiful. I'm in this contest as well, but your poem will be hard to beat. The rhyming is lovely and descriptive. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 26-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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Hi Harmony, I'm glad you felt I captured last year within my words. Thank you for the great review! Good Luck with your entry!:o)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem for the spring writing prompt. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Beautiful overall presentation background colour and font. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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This is a beautifully written poem for the spring writing prompt. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Beautiful overall presentation background colour and font. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and wishes for the contest, bith mean a lot to me! :o)
Comment from Pj Dennison
This poem is exceptional. The abcb rhyme scheme is well done and the meter is strong throughout the poem. The imagery from the poem lends itself to envisioning a once frozen winter land transforming into a vibrant green haven before ones eyes; grass sprouting, blooms opening, birds nesting, etc. There is movement in this imagery as the spring time comes to life as this poem depicts. Beautifully written.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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This poem is exceptional. The abcb rhyme scheme is well done and the meter is strong throughout the poem. The imagery from the poem lends itself to envisioning a once frozen winter land transforming into a vibrant green haven before ones eyes; grass sprouting, blooms opening, birds nesting, etc. There is movement in this imagery as the spring time comes to life as this poem depicts. Beautifully written.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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Pi, You brought me a smile ....a mile wide!!! I so wanted this poem to touch the reader. You just told me I did just that!! Thank you SO much for the extraordinary rating!!!!
