Bye Bye Biggie
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Rings and Things"Young love and old wounds revisited.
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Comment from Ulla
Oh, Lin, this is sensational writing and I love every bit of it. It's sharp, its witty and it's raw to the point where tears are not far away.
She pretend to be angry with Sid, but can't hide that her feelings towards him have never diminished. So now what is to happen? Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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Oh, Lin, this is sensational writing and I love every bit of it. It's sharp, its witty and it's raw to the point where tears are not far away.
She pretend to be angry with Sid, but can't hide that her feelings towards him have never diminished. So now what is to happen? Ulla:)))
Comment Written 25-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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Thanks. I?m winding down. Zee. I love the silliness of the coaster. Both characters have their peculiarities. Something small can lead to something big. Thanks for reading.,
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
As always, witty banter, snide-n-snarky, albeit with an uncomfortably hostile undertone. The interchange seems over-wrought; the bit about the ripped-off blouse is over-the-top, so to speak. That said, well written, as always.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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As always, witty banter, snide-n-snarky, albeit with an uncomfortably hostile undertone. The interchange seems over-wrought; the bit about the ripped-off blouse is over-the-top, so to speak. That said, well written, as always.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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Thank you. Zee is a basket case. The insignificant interchange about a stupid coaster defines her relationships. Thanks for continuing to read.
