Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao mystery poet..I gave you your 3 vote!

I enjoyed your poem

and Michael's music ..it 's a shame he had this thing about wanting to be white .. ruined his face with surgery.

You don't hear much about his children , hope they are healthy both in body and mind.

Michael brought a lot of joy to the world but he personally had a very sad life.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021

I love your review. Thanks

Comment from Bonnie Seach

Excellent

A commendable description of Michael Jackson. I don't wish to review him. So I focus on your content. I believe that each one who enters a contest like this is serious about being an author. I admire the effort that many put into their work. I wish you success

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021

Many thanks Bonnie.

Comment from dee_kamuyu

Good

A good introduction,one can easily tell the writer is a good story teller,that got my attention and would get the attention of any reader.

The second stanza However had me feeling like there was a little mix up on the grammar .

Sad short story, profound, sounds like a true story, I am about to research o this king of Pop.I would read the poets work any day

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021

Thanks

Comment from Jansella

Excellent

I love the ending of the poem. It brought the whole poem to life. I got the vibe that it's not just about MJ, but about people in general who are pressured through life with so much triumph. Death is the only real peace.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021

Thanks for the great review. Much appreciated.