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Ridin' The Trail Again12 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
Nicely done. I liked your uneducated Western cowboy dialect. It made the story sound like it would if being told by someone on riding the trails in the old west. I'm glad ol' Hank didn't get away with taking Storm.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Nicely done. I liked your uneducated Western cowboy dialect. It made the story sound like it would if being told by someone on riding the trails in the old west. I'm glad ol' Hank didn't get away with taking Storm.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Always appreciate your insights and reviews.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is different. The cowboys from the trail herd usually get the honor of being ran out of town. It's refreshing to see them win one for a change. LOL Well done, Bret. I am a western fan you know. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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This is different. The cowboys from the trail herd usually get the honor of being ran out of town. It's refreshing to see them win one for a change. LOL Well done, Bret. I am a western fan you know. Nancy:)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this story. Always enjoy a Western. They are fun to write.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Matthew, I-was thinken that you done a purduee good job of tellen things, like they was. What I was wanted to know was,now ole Hank made it out the door after you was through beaten him up like that?
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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Dear Matthew, I-was thinken that you done a purduee good job of tellen things, like they was. What I was wanted to know was,now ole Hank made it out the door after you was through beaten him up like that?
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this Western. Much appreciate the review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This is a rootin' tootin' good old fashioned cowboy tale with a young whipper snapper like Tommy, old nasty bad guy like Hank, and the guy you don't mess with like our narrator.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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This is a rootin' tootin' good old fashioned cowboy tale with a young whipper snapper like Tommy, old nasty bad guy like Hank, and the guy you don't mess with like our narrator.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this Western. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Sankey
Good old story and so glad I had a SIX for it! Are ya gonna do more with this? Plenty of blood and guts hehe. Well done and no spags anywhere as far as I could tell.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Good old story and so glad I had a SIX for it! Are ya gonna do more with this? Plenty of blood and guts hehe. Well done and no spags anywhere as far as I could tell.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Been hanging loose of FS lately. What's new in your world?
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I been the same lately. All sorts of stuff going on. I need to do another ramble and maybe another one after that. Watch Facebook as I have a report to do on Wednesday last.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I don't usually have any sixes so late in the week, but I somehow managed to keep this one in hopes of tagging something special. They say that westerns don't sale anymore in bookstores or at the box office. But I'm still a fan of all those Maverick, John Wayne, and Clint Eastwood moments. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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I don't usually have any sixes so late in the week, but I somehow managed to keep this one in hopes of tagging something special. They say that westerns don't sale anymore in bookstores or at the box office. But I'm still a fan of all those Maverick, John Wayne, and Clint Eastwood moments. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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As always appreciate your thoughtful insights and the sixer. HOORAY!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm pretty sure O'Hank doesn't want to mess you anymore. I sure wouldn't. I enjoyed reading your short story. I am always amazed at how people can tell a complete story in such a few words. It's takes me over 80,000 to tell anything. My boys say, "Mom, give us the short version." I thought I was. LOL
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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I'm pretty sure O'Hank doesn't want to mess you anymore. I sure wouldn't. I enjoyed reading your short story. I am always amazed at how people can tell a complete story in such a few words. It's takes me over 80,000 to tell anything. My boys say, "Mom, give us the short version." I thought I was. LOL
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this story. Much appreciate the review.
Comment from Chris Fruge
I thought this was an enjoyable piece about an experienced cowhand standing up in defense of a younger hand. The language added additional authenticity to the piece although to admit
'seed' took a little getting to use to. (Maybe it should be "see'd"?). I'd be interested in reading additional pieces that develop these characters further.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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I thought this was an enjoyable piece about an experienced cowhand standing up in defense of a younger hand. The language added additional authenticity to the piece although to admit
'seed' took a little getting to use to. (Maybe it should be "see'd"?). I'd be interested in reading additional pieces that develop these characters further.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this story. Appreciate the review.
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You?re welcome
Comment from BeckyRae
Good ol' western story. Only thing is, when you left the store you were going to send the wagon for them, then at the end you said you picked them up. Am I missing something?
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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Good ol' western story. Only thing is, when you left the store you were going to send the wagon for them, then at the end you said you picked them up. Am I missing something?
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this story. Much appreciate the review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Leann DS
Nice western story, although I cringed at teeth being injured, with a fun use of old western dialect. I think that really added to the overall feel of the peice.
Thank you for sharing this. Hugs and blessings to you. And a good dentist to Harry. (Cringe)
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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Nice western story, although I cringed at teeth being injured, with a fun use of old western dialect. I think that really added to the overall feel of the peice.
Thank you for sharing this. Hugs and blessings to you. And a good dentist to Harry. (Cringe)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this story. Much appreciate the review.
