Bye Bye Biggie
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Combing through the past."Young love and old wounds revisited.
3 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hi Lin, oh I liked this chapter a lot. It was raw, it was honest and full of painful truth. But I see some softening coming through. Now the phone call. Is it bad news? Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Hi Lin, oh I liked this chapter a lot. It was raw, it was honest and full of painful truth. But I see some softening coming through. Now the phone call. Is it bad news? Ulla:)))
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thanks much. It gets interesting. The past is never really past....it?s like a shadow that?s always there...but some days you just don?t see it.
Comment from Leann DS
Wow! That story was suvtlysubtly intense. I really enjoyed it, and I did not notice any typographical errors. It was well told with good dialogue. Thank you for sharing. Hugs.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Wow! That story was suvtlysubtly intense. I really enjoyed it, and I did not notice any typographical errors. It was well told with good dialogue. Thank you for sharing. Hugs.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Heartrending. Powerfully narrated, vividly devastating imagery. I read the prior chapter a few days ago. Backstory in character list is appreciated!
No one in our household took [bathes=>BATHS] except for Biggie.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Heartrending. Powerfully narrated, vividly devastating imagery. I read the prior chapter a few days ago. Backstory in character list is appreciated!
No one in our household took [bathes=>BATHS] except for Biggie.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thanks for all your encouragement and catches.
