Time is important
Don't waste it10 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This looping poem, Time Is Important, ends with quiet and fills the rest with the realization that time is racing to that timelessness. Let's make some noise while there's time.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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This looping poem, Time Is Important, ends with quiet and fills the rest with the realization that time is racing to that timelessness. Let's make some noise while there's time.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much, yes we must
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
How creative! You obviously put much thought into this poem. Acrostic, loop. Beautiful presentation and message. I especially liked, 'important to the second everyone to embrace'. Very best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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How creative! You obviously put much thought into this poem. Acrostic, loop. Beautiful presentation and message. I especially liked, 'important to the second everyone to embrace'. Very best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Wendy G
I wonder if eternity will be quiet? It will be different, for sure. Your poem addresses the word prompt well and with originality. But I think having peace and quietness in the present life is not time wasted, it is refreshing and restorative. Well written.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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I wonder if eternity will be quiet? It will be different, for sure. Your poem addresses the word prompt well and with originality. But I think having peace and quietness in the present life is not time wasted, it is refreshing and restorative. Well written.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Time is important and valuable. People should treasure time and make good use of it to make it meaningful.
I agree with The poem that we should not waste any time.
Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Time is important and valuable. People should treasure time and make good use of it to make it meaningful.
I agree with The poem that we should not waste any time.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Patty Palmer
A nice entry for the quiet contest. I don't seek out quiet either. I love the hustle and bustle of life.
Life, loud and long! After raising three boys and now a granddaughter who is 17 going on 21 LOL I don't remember very many quiet times. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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A nice entry for the quiet contest. I don't seek out quiet either. I love the hustle and bustle of life.
Life, loud and long! After raising three boys and now a granddaughter who is 17 going on 21 LOL I don't remember very many quiet times. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dilettante junior
Good job with your poem. I like the loop you have chosen. In fact it talks about time, which is a never ending loop. The photo fits right in. The message is quite powerful. Bravo!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Good job with your poem. I like the loop you have chosen. In fact it talks about time, which is a never ending loop. The photo fits right in. The message is quite powerful. Bravo!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Quiet time is so appreciated when reading or wriitng or being by yourself when you need time to think. When you get older, drama is not always necessay to make one happy.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Quiet time is so appreciated when reading or wriitng or being by yourself when you need time to think. When you get older, drama is not always necessay to make one happy.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Anne Johnston
A very good choice for the contest "Quiet". I like how you have written this taking the last word of each line and making it first in the next one. I like your good advice:
"Embrace all that was given, wasting no time
Time that's racing, to an eternity of quiet"
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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A very good choice for the contest "Quiet". I like how you have written this taking the last word of each line and making it first in the next one. I like your good advice:
"Embrace all that was given, wasting no time
Time that's racing, to an eternity of quiet"
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much
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You are welcome
Comment from Angel Thompson
This demands the thoughts of the reader. Your words read beautifully as they paint an inspired perspective. Achieving flow in this structure is no small feat. Wonderful writing.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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This demands the thoughts of the reader. Your words read beautifully as they paint an inspired perspective. Achieving flow in this structure is no small feat. Wonderful writing.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thank you so very much, I like trying to obtain flow and making sense out of these forms and I am very appreciative of you acknowledging that, many thanks
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I can see the effort , yet I read no signs of a forced write. It was a pleasure to read. Excellent job.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love peace and quiet and never think it is overrated, but some people enjoy the hustle and bustle of a city or nightlife. Your poem fulfilled the brief here and I wish you luck with it, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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I love peace and quiet and never think it is overrated, but some people enjoy the hustle and bustle of a city or nightlife. Your poem fulfilled the brief here and I wish you luck with it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much, and I will admit I like my quiet time as well
