Nigel and Ned
a fifty-word story8 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
You had quite a bit of fun with this both for the letter N and the nighttime notions. You also gave your reader quite a bit of fun with the tale in only 50 words.
A remarkable talent and mind with a light-hearted pen.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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You had quite a bit of fun with this both for the letter N and the nighttime notions. You also gave your reader quite a bit of fun with the tale in only 50 words.
A remarkable talent and mind with a light-hearted pen.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Mary.
Comment from lyenochka
It seems Ned and Nigel had nothing to worry about. It seems Nelly is quite a capable woman to fend off any unwanted "niceties" and called it a night. I see you are doing the same alphabet flash fiction that Katherine did last year.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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It seems Ned and Nigel had nothing to worry about. It seems Nelly is quite a capable woman to fend off any unwanted "niceties" and called it a night. I see you are doing the same alphabet flash fiction that Katherine did last year.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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The same?
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Similar - not the same. You're both completely different but delightful writers!
Comment from Jay Squires
A nimble fifty-word exercise in the use of alliteration. Apparently, Newton couldn't keep his attention on the task at hand but was more taken in by noticing his neighbors, Ned and Nigel failed to return Newton's nod. I think this inattention miffed Nelly and she called it off. Newton nodded again to Ned's words of encouragement ... But we don't find out if Ned nodded this time.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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A nimble fifty-word exercise in the use of alliteration. Apparently, Newton couldn't keep his attention on the task at hand but was more taken in by noticing his neighbors, Ned and Nigel failed to return Newton's nod. I think this inattention miffed Nelly and she called it off. Newton nodded again to Ned's words of encouragement ... But we don't find out if Ned nodded this time.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Jay. Ned*s nod was N-ternal and never narrated.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yes, your little story highlighting the let tern is ''nuff said." I enjoyed reading it. The use of the same letter so many time didn't interfere with understanding this night time, almost, naughtiness.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Yes, your little story highlighting the let tern is ''nuff said." I enjoyed reading it. The use of the same letter so many time didn't interfere with understanding this night time, almost, naughtiness.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Jan.
Comment from nomi338
Good dudes doing due diligence, denying Dudley do wrong the opportunity to ravish a ravishing, radically beautiful buxom babe, bursting at the seams or so it seems. Maybe the boys idea is maybe with enough lettuce, she just might let us have a go.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Good dudes doing due diligence, denying Dudley do wrong the opportunity to ravish a ravishing, radically beautiful buxom babe, bursting at the seams or so it seems. Maybe the boys idea is maybe with enough lettuce, she just might let us have a go.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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I*m glad you followed the story, nomi. Most couldn*t.
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Been there wanted to do that. :)
Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly
Neither nasty nor noble, but a great story, nibley navigating around the use of letter N. Great line "No harm no foul noted Ned. Newton nodded.
Nuff said."
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Neither nasty nor noble, but a great story, nibley navigating around the use of letter N. Great line "No harm no foul noted Ned. Newton nodded.
Nuff said."
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thank you again, BSB.
Comment from pome lover
I bet you had fun with this one - just typing away with a grin on your face.
Well, it was fun. What if, at the end, Newton nodded nefariously?
No?
this was enjoyable. good show.
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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I bet you had fun with this one - just typing away with a grin on your face.
Well, it was fun. What if, at the end, Newton nodded nefariously?
No?
this was enjoyable. good show.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Katharine, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a "N" word nonsense piece. I'm not sure what's going on here but I enjoy reading it and hear the sound of it. I admire your skill of finding all these "N" words and having fun with them.
Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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What a "N" word nonsense piece. I'm not sure what's going on here but I enjoy reading it and hear the sound of it. I admire your skill of finding all these "N" words and having fun with them.
Well done.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Lisa.
