Mitchell
a fifty-word story16 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job highlighting the letter m in your short story. It seems the mister here had too many mrs.'s and his first mrs. didn't like him messing around--even though he married many.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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You did a good job highlighting the letter m in your short story. It seems the mister here had too many mrs.'s and his first mrs. didn't like him messing around--even though he married many.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Jan
Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly
Mega manipulated M. Very good take on the brief, magnificent mangement of Mrs's. My favourite line is "Mitchell's monogamous marital state mushroomed to a multi-Mrs. McGogo menagerie"
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Mega manipulated M. Very good take on the brief, magnificent mangement of Mrs's. My favourite line is "Mitchell's monogamous marital state mushroomed to a multi-Mrs. McGogo menagerie"
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thank you, BSB
Comment from Sally Law
My my, messy indeed. One woman is enough. We have a friend who has married five times (for real.) I'm just waiting for the other high-heel to drop.
Sending along my very best for this fun post,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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My my, messy indeed. One woman is enough. We have a friend who has married five times (for real.) I'm just waiting for the other high-heel to drop.
Sending along my very best for this fun post,
Sally :))
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Sal.
Comment from juliaSjames
You certainly indulged in ghoulish humour Bill. Poor Mitchell. He suffered for his greed.
The alliteration made me smile. Giving LisaMay a run for her money huh?
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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You certainly indulged in ghoulish humour Bill. Poor Mitchell. He suffered for his greed.
The alliteration made me smile. Giving LisaMay a run for her money huh?
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Julia
Comment from oliver818
Wow I didn't expect that ending. Even if he was a bit of bastard that a horrible thing to suffer. Well done on this though, it's very difficult to write a poem with so many words starting with the same letter but you pulled it off. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Wow I didn't expect that ending. Even if he was a bit of bastard that a horrible thing to suffer. Well done on this though, it's very difficult to write a poem with so many words starting with the same letter but you pulled it off. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Oliver
Comment from nomi338
The length some men will go to just to smash a nut. It takes a special brand of fool to risk the anger of just one woman, but to involve multiple women? Obviously this fool has a death wish and is on a fast track to destruction. All that I can say is, better him than me.
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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The length some men will go to just to smash a nut. It takes a special brand of fool to risk the anger of just one woman, but to involve multiple women? Obviously this fool has a death wish and is on a fast track to destruction. All that I can say is, better him than me.
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thanks, nomi, for checking this out. Bill
