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Lift the Darkness

The World is waiting

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Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hello Kace, you could not have written anything more lovely than these six words. These short challenges are not easy - you have done so well with this one. Great addition, the very appropriate picture. Well done girl - warm regards Dorothy xx GOOD LUCK!!

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
    Hello Dottie! Thanks for your kind words of encouragement. I hope you are safe, on a farm outside of London? There is nothing like being in the country. I would immigrate if I wasn't so ancient. Britain has my heart. I drove from London out to Yarmouth, back to York and on to Scotland in '88. Whereabouts are you? Blessings, K.
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Kace, there are so many my sweet friend
waiting to see what Gods next move will be...
we just all need to stand strong with Him...and by His side sweetie pie...He is fighting for us...

I love your poem beautiful you...and love this picture...very nicely written...love you much...Linda xxoo

I hope you are feeling better you...and Thank You for all your beautiful cards...love xxoo

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
    G'day mate! Thanks for reading; feeling better yes. I'm waiting on a dog and I go out three times a week now - smiling :-)) Big hugs to Mrs Sandwich XX
reply by l.raven on 23-Apr-2021
    awesome...so glad you are feeling better Sweetie Pie...I hope they find you the perfect dog... and your so welcome...smiling big back at you...biggest hugs and love...LOL...Mrs. Sandwich...xxoo
Comment from Janetsue
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This is a wonderful 6 word poetry entry, Kay! More peace is needed all around us worldwide. It is so sad that many do not look upwards to find it. I really felt comforted by your posting, my friend. xo

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
    So glad my message touched you. We are waiting for the Son to rise. The World is in a terrible state. "Come unto me all you who are lost and heavy laden, I will give you rest." Jesus said. Thanks for reading my friend. Love, Kay xx
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your contest entry is in great form, Aussie. Your 6 well thought out words speak volumes. The internal rhyme peace/release works perfectly as does the beautiful image. Best wishes.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
    Hello Jan, I wracked my brain for the right words. We are all waiting for the return of Jesus to clean this world up! Blessings, Kay xx
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a nicely written six word poem. Dove of peace our sweet release. Beautiful photo to compliment your poem. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
    Thank you Joanne. We are all waiting for the return of Jesus - the darkness of this world needs His light. Blessings, Kay xx
Comment from aryr
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Good luck wishes to you Kace in the 6 word poetry contest. I loved the picture-the dove of peace on earth and your simple words did indeed declare what the world was waiting for. Well done.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
    Hello Alie, Thank you for reading and understanding. We wait in joyful hope for the coming of the Lord. Love, Kay xx
reply by aryr on 22-Apr-2021
    You are so welcome Kace
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made excellent use of your six words to convey a powerful, sweet message. The Source of peace is the Lord. The earth does not have peace because people--the majority--won't turn to Him!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
    I agree with you, but they are scared now. In their hearts they know He is coming and they only have one choice. Blessings, Kay xx
Comment from Wendy G
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Yes, it will be very sweet, to have release from this world and its troubles. A peaceful and symbolic image, which goes well with your theme of both release and peace. Hope He comes soon!!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
    Thank you Wendy. Kxx
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This 6 Word Poetry contest entry speaks man's true symbol of peace, we know our appreciation is right; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
    Thank you my friend. K xx
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Few words imparting a great gift to the world here. I wish you luck with the contest, it is hard to deliver a message in only six words, but you succeeded here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
    G'day Dolly, Thanks so much for reading. "We wait in joyful hope for the coming of the Lord." Love, K xx