Life is Short
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Comment from mermaids
Even house flies deserve a poem. Excellent use of vivid words that capture clearly the life cycle of this insect from maggot to fly. Excellent poetic form that is smooth and a theme that is different.
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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Even house flies deserve a poem. Excellent use of vivid words that capture clearly the life cycle of this insect from maggot to fly. Excellent poetic form that is smooth and a theme that is different.
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Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Thank you. I could not think of anything else since there is this one, pesky fly who won't stop landing on my hand. hugs!
