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I Stand in Faith

a contest entry

4 total reviews 
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Pharp
Your rhyming words are excellent and your loop poem shows how your faith is strong.
Faith is to believe what you do not see; the reward of this faith is to see what you believe. ~ Saint Augustin

Gert

 Comment Written 04-May-2021

reply by the author on 05-May-2021
    Hello Gert,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated. I pray that you and Stan are doing well.
    Have a wonderful and blessed day.

    Portia
reply by Gert sherwood on 05-May-2021
    You are so welcome pharp
    Gert





























Comment from lyenochka
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Amen!! I love your spiritual poems, Portia! Thank you for reminding us of our spiritual security that Jesus bought for us and "sealed us with His great love!"

By the way, the loop poem rhyme scheme for the contest is abcb but you did an even more difficult aabb scheme. Your looping and rhyming are superb. I don't if you have to abide by the contest rhyming rule.

 Comment Written 04-May-2021

reply by the author on 05-May-2021
    Helen,

    Thank you for your review and very kind comments.
    I realized the rhyme scheme was not correct when I reviewed another entry for this contest. It was too late for me to change, so I decided to leave it as is. It was challenging and fun. I'll get it right the next time.

    Hugs...Portia

    Portia
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello Pharp!
I've missed you!
What a heartfelt and moving testimony of your faith - and delivered exceptionally well in a Loop poetic format! No easy task.
Each stanza flows so well and is meaningul both in message and form.
Kudos!

Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 04-May-2021

reply by the author on 05-May-2021
    Hello Diane,

    I missed you as well, and it is great to be back.

    Thanks so much for such an outstanding review; your very kind comments are greatly appreciated.

    I pray you and your family are doing well.
    Have a wonderful day.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Anne Johnston
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"God takes care of those who trust and believe -
Believe and trust in God's word to achieve"
Good job on this loop poem, good rhyming and some great truths you have expressed.

 Comment Written 04-May-2021

reply by the author on 05-May-2021
    Anne.

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
reply by Anne Johnston on 05-May-2021
    You are welcome