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Comment from Gloria ....
This is a most interesting poetic form, and I remember seeing it a few times, but didn't commit it to memory.
That said, excellent use of aural and visual imagery to evoke the differences of night falling, and day breaking.
A fine addition to your NaPo project.
Gloria
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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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This is a most interesting poetic form, and I remember seeing it a few times, but didn't commit it to memory.
That said, excellent use of aural and visual imagery to evoke the differences of night falling, and day breaking.
A fine addition to your NaPo project.
Gloria
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Dear Gloria, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Eternal Muse
I enjoyed this rhyming poem. It is beautiful and I admired the imagery and visuals. I also liked your yellow font color; it's like sunshine broke into the page.
Thank you very much for sharing; this was truly delightful.
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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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I enjoyed this rhyming poem. It is beautiful and I admired the imagery and visuals. I also liked your yellow font color; it's like sunshine broke into the page.
Thank you very much for sharing; this was truly delightful.
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Dear Eternal Muse, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
