Battle-scarred
8 word poem7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This eight-word poem, Battle-scarred, has the required word count and reminds us that seven days of war begins with the first day on duty.
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This eight-word poem, Battle-scarred, has the required word count and reminds us that seven days of war begins with the first day on duty.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
Comment from Kiara Wiggins
I was always taught that the week begins on Sunday. Let me tell you, when Sunday comes, I am preparing for battle! Battling the clock, the traffic, the workload, the homework, the kitchen. I feel this!
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I was always taught that the week begins on Sunday. Let me tell you, when Sunday comes, I am preparing for battle! Battling the clock, the traffic, the workload, the homework, the kitchen. I feel this!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
Comment from Dilettante junior
Nice job. You got your eight words just right with a nice title, photo and background. It meaning stands out. A unique take on sunday being the first weekday is bold. Bravo!
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Nice job. You got your eight words just right with a nice title, photo and background. It meaning stands out. A unique take on sunday being the first weekday is bold. Bravo!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This 8 Words writing prompt poem contest entry speaks order for going to the battleground came on Sunday that leads the week and you all had to go for the war; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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This 8 Words writing prompt poem contest entry speaks order for going to the battleground came on Sunday that leads the week and you all had to go for the war; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Sad words and your presentation reminds me of soldiers who are vulnerable and how many lose their lives on the battle field. Our history is riddled with war, a poignant write, love Dolly x
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Sad words and your presentation reminds me of soldiers who are vulnerable and how many lose their lives on the battle field. Our history is riddled with war, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This is how we face the new week: "Sunday
leads the week
into a war zone" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest and with your writings.
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This is how we face the new week: "Sunday
leads the week
into a war zone" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry reads well, Mystery Author. You handled the prompt well. Your 8 words are well thought out, and pair perfectly with the image. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your contest entry reads well, Mystery Author. You handled the prompt well. Your 8 words are well thought out, and pair perfectly with the image. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
