Reflective Reflection
One-sentence poem43 total reviews
Comment from Poetic Friend
Yes, I agree wholeheartedly with your sentiments -- it's extraordinary to jump into the ordinary. Relishing your the sun and sky is an extraordinary ordinary, indeed.
I loved this poem. Good luck in the contest, my friend.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
Yes, I agree wholeheartedly with your sentiments -- it's extraordinary to jump into the ordinary. Relishing your the sun and sky is an extraordinary ordinary, indeed.
I loved this poem. Good luck in the contest, my friend.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your great comments, Poetic Friend.
Comment from Ginnygray
Great one line write with lovely art work that so adequately enhances the writing! Looking for days of sun and sky do provide warmth, a shinier disposition for the day, and rays to nurture growth of new spring flowers and plant life! Enjoyed, best of luck!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
Great one line write with lovely art work that so adequately enhances the writing! Looking for days of sun and sky do provide warmth, a shinier disposition for the day, and rays to nurture growth of new spring flowers and plant life! Enjoyed, best of luck!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for reading my lines. I appreciate it.
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You are so welcome!
Comment from Vanna1
Good presentation, you picked a nice image to compliment your words. I like your take on the little things being so important. Nature can captive forever. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
Good presentation, you picked a nice image to compliment your words. I like your take on the little things being so important. Nature can captive forever. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting, dear Vanna1.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
You have expressed a philosophy of life in one sentence! very creative and interesting indeed! Yes. We need to be open-minded and let positivity embrace our lives. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
You have expressed a philosophy of life in one sentence! very creative and interesting indeed! Yes. We need to be open-minded and let positivity embrace our lives. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thank you for reading my work, Seshadri.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written one sentence poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words with very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
This is a very beautiful and very well written one sentence poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words with very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love, Teri
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your great review, Teri.
Comment from RGstar
Hard to gauge one lined poems, but it is worth knowing , if there is concentration to detail, one can see a good one.
Well done.
Have a great week...and god luck in the competition.
My best.
RG
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
Hard to gauge one lined poems, but it is worth knowing , if there is concentration to detail, one can see a good one.
Well done.
Have a great week...and god luck in the competition.
My best.
RG
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thank you for reading and commenting in my short poem, dear friend RG.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
it's etraordinary to take a leap into the ordinary...
love that phrase in your well thought out one line poem Amada. The extraordinary beauty and peace of Nature's scenery is a wonderful potion to breathe in. Lovely presentation,
cheers.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
it's etraordinary to take a leap into the ordinary...
love that phrase in your well thought out one line poem Amada. The extraordinary beauty and peace of Nature's scenery is a wonderful potion to breathe in. Lovely presentation,
cheers.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for commenting in my work, Pearl.
Comment from juliaSjames
Yes it is extraordinary. That's why I enjoy composing haiku. The ordinary and everyday transform into miracles of creation.
There's a conversational style to this entry that is very appealing, draws the reader in.
Good luck in the contest, Amada.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
Yes it is extraordinary. That's why I enjoy composing haiku. The ordinary and everyday transform into miracles of creation.
There's a conversational style to this entry that is very appealing, draws the reader in.
Good luck in the contest, Amada.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much, Julia.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
In these days of pandemic lockdown, it is not the norm any longer to just take a walk in the sun. We pray this too will pass. I guess this is a time of testing our metal.
Ralf
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
In these days of pandemic lockdown, it is not the norm any longer to just take a walk in the sun. We pray this too will pass. I guess this is a time of testing our metal.
Ralf
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your great comments, Ralf.
Comment from harmony13
These words are inspiring and brought me to a place of awe. The author's words are clear, interesting and creative. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
These words are inspiring and brought me to a place of awe. The author's words are clear, interesting and creative. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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I truly appreciate your lovely review to my one line poem, thank you harmony13.