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Sad News

Hearing of the death of a loved one

2 total reviews 
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your contest entry is well-written, though poignant, Mystery Author. Your words are well thought out, the image is a great pairing, and the play on the word thread (you used dread) along with unravelling work well. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
    Thank you for your read and encouraging review.
Comment from RodG
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Your title plus the eight words you chose could not express the power of tragic news any better. I remember too well those phone calls when I was notified of my father's death and a few years later my mother's. Well done! Rod

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
    Thank you for your read and encouraging review.