Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

That was quite a confrontation. I'm interested to find out what Sam Michaels does next. Also looking forward to finding out how Jena is fairing. I know Joseph's story is still not finished. There is so much left in this nail biter. Anticipating your next posting. Thanks for sharing this great story.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021

Thanks Faye :)

The two detectives are getting close to arresting A&E Pharmaceuticals with the help of the Breedline and Jena. Her story will come back next week. Things are moving along. Then we have Joseph's story to continue.
I'm hoping to get on with the story without writers block.

Right now I'm out enjoying some time off camping. Lots of ideas to inspire me.

Thanks again my friend.
Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 19-Apr-2021

Enjoy your campout and come back with lots of ideas.
Blessings,
Faye

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

It seems Manuel and Frank have the goods on Sam Michaels, who is involved in some illegal business, and threaten him with exposure if he doesn't come clean concerning his sympathy towards his brother's connection with A & E pharmaceutical. And finds out the names of the thugs who kidnapped Jena. The threaten him with exposure if he doesn't come clean. A great episode Shana, great writing my friend, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021

Thanks so much, Roy :)

I sure enjoy writing about those two detectives. Mysteries are fun to create. Right now I'm out camping enjoying mother nature. It's nice to get away for a change, plus there is lots of inspiration in the wilderness.

Thanks again for all your kind words and encouragement.

Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 19-Apr-2021

Have a great time dear girl, be inspired, bless you

Comment from BeckyRae

Excellent

First off, no apostrophe on Detectives. Also, in the line "You corporate with us..." should be "cooperate with us." Interesting scene. I wish I knew more of the story. Some parts come off a little awkward, like the receptionist giving Frank the eye. Does this play a part in the story later? If not, lose it. I am interested in reading more of this.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021

Thanks so much, Becky Rae:)

I appreciate your feedback and the mistakes you caught. This is why I love FanStory. Everyone is so helpful.

Hope to hear from you again.
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Chapter of the Supernatural Fiction from the Book: The Curse speaks repressively the taletelling about bad boy bails, progresses thru plot development, fostered by dialogues realistic; ends with formal investigation information; well said, well done, thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021

Thanks so much, ALCREATOR :)

Your feedback is always something I look forward to. You have great insight and you're always positive.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

This is an interesting book that has super natural beings like Breedline twins, forced drug experiment on people through Adam & Eve Pharmaceuticals. One of the woman victim was very capable at fighting.

I might have read one of your chapters before. I will have to become a fan.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021

Thank you, Lisa! :)

Your kind words and positive feedback is such a blessing. This is why I love FanStory. Everyone here is so helpful.

Hope to hear from you again.
Sincerely,
Shana :)