Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Football Chapter 15 part 1"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I love how this is going, Barbara, of course they will be a couple by the end of the book. lol. So, those dogs are getting to be more nervous when they are standing outside Katherine's house, one day it would be nice to let them off their leads and tell them to fetch!! lol. I could just see Mr Frost being dragged screaming across the road. Now the new term has started and the sports will be taking place. I bet the girls will get up that hill easily! Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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I love how this is going, Barbara, of course they will be a couple by the end of the book. lol. So, those dogs are getting to be more nervous when they are standing outside Katherine's house, one day it would be nice to let them off their leads and tell them to fetch!! lol. I could just see Mr Frost being dragged screaming across the road. Now the new term has started and the sports will be taking place. I bet the girls will get up that hill easily! Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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The girls sure will. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from bhogg
Another great post. Some interesting things to me: keeping players at the school on game day (great idea), having a homework time before practice (another great idea). I know football is big in Alabama, but I think Texas is something else. Loved your dialog in this one. It was almost like being there and listening to the pep rally. Bill
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Another great post. Some interesting things to me: keeping players at the school on game day (great idea), having a homework time before practice (another great idea). I know football is big in Alabama, but I think Texas is something else. Loved your dialog in this one. It was almost like being there and listening to the pep rally. Bill
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Being military my boys played in SC and Texas, both high schools did that. One coach told me, "What makes a good football player doesn't necessarily make a good citizen." LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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A great thought by that coach!
Comment from eliz100
This is another great installment. It is interesting from beginning to end. I believe there is an error. The paragraph starts with, "We did and I do." On the second line you have, "could've have met"
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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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This is another great installment. It is interesting from beginning to end. I believe there is an error. The paragraph starts with, "We did and I do." On the second line you have, "could've have met"
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Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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I changed that line up. Thank you for the catch.
Comment from Judy Lawless
I like the way this story is moving along. It will be interesting to see what transpires at the football game. It seems more like a social event for Katherine, but Gabriel will camouflage it with some work for her.
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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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I like the way this story is moving along. It will be interesting to see what transpires at the football game. It seems more like a social event for Katherine, but Gabriel will camouflage it with some work for her.
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Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
