Comment from Sharon Davis

Excellent

This story introduces James, a follower of Jesus. It also uses the character to reflect upon and highlight some of Jesus' notable character traits and teachings. The story flows well. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 17-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021

Thanks for reveiwing zanya

Comment from T B Botts

Excellent

This was very well done. It's easy to read the text in the bible and not really give it a lot of thought. These characters were real people, they had real lives before and after Jesus. Of course the bible doesn't delve too deeply into each of the characters, but it tells us what we need to know. I can see James observing, wondering, wanting to return to the familiar. I myself am a commercial fisherman and if someone came to me with a new, radical idea or way of life, I don't know how I would respond. Good story. Well done.

Tom

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 Comment Written 17-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021

What a superb review and engagement with the tale - from a real fisherman. zanya