Bye Bye Biggie
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Waseca or Dwight?"Young love and old wounds revisited.
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Comment from Ulla
I love it, Lin, I absolutely love it. I must say the man has a point. Who the heck would believe him.
I must admit I got totally hung up with mount St. Helen. For twenty years I flew into Seattle from Denmark at least twice a month and stayed there 4 days at a time. I made lots of excursions. Needless to say I know the state of Washington quite well. I knew Mount Helen before and after she blew her hat. I was a cabin attendant for twenty years, 1974-1994.
Now, that apart, the story is taking an interesting turn indeed. The writing is to the point and dialogue is spot on as usual. I so enjoy this story. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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I love it, Lin, I absolutely love it. I must say the man has a point. Who the heck would believe him.
I must admit I got totally hung up with mount St. Helen. For twenty years I flew into Seattle from Denmark at least twice a month and stayed there 4 days at a time. I made lots of excursions. Needless to say I know the state of Washington quite well. I knew Mount Helen before and after she blew her hat. I was a cabin attendant for twenty years, 1974-1994.
Now, that apart, the story is taking an interesting turn indeed. The writing is to the point and dialogue is spot on as usual. I so enjoy this story. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thanks Darlink!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Is kidnapping a federal offense! This was a terrific chapter. Unique and enjoyable - fun to read. You do a great job with the dialogue and bringing your characters to life.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Is kidnapping a federal offense! This was a terrific chapter. Unique and enjoyable - fun to read. You do a great job with the dialogue and bringing your characters to life.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Hey, thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Gripping--frantic pace--witty dialog rife with delicious snark. Vivid imagery. Brilliant work!
hyphenate cloak-and-dagger meet-and-greet
Carmel=>caramel
Zees=>Zee's unofficially adopted daughter.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Gripping--frantic pace--witty dialog rife with delicious snark. Vivid imagery. Brilliant work!
hyphenate cloak-and-dagger meet-and-greet
Carmel=>caramel
Zees=>Zee's unofficially adopted daughter.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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For what ever reason, when I use the hyphen...Zee?s...it comes out like gibberish when I post? Why? Thanks for the kind words. Zee
