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The Way of LIfe

Jesus is the way...

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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The Way of LIfe
by pharp

Excellent poem about God's love and racism. Some lines are perfect expression of what goes on in our country, it's a disgrace. We still have public lynchings, like George floyd's.

"Never should a man be hung from a tree" well said.

"Imagine one's self a different race;." This would be a great way to punish a racist like white supremacists.

I love the ending...
"God created us all...His Masterpiece!"

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
    Gypsy,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Hugs...Portia
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork and
presentation, Portia.
-A well written poem
with descriptive detail
and rhyme.
-It is a poignant piece that makes
good points, like "The way of life
should be perfect and free."
-A good concluding verse with
a good question excellent answer.
-Well done!

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
    Pam,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Hugs...Portia
reply by Pam (respa) on 24-Jun-2021
    You are very welcome, Portia.
Comment from Begin Again
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My beloved family is one of mixed colors and I am blessed by God to be able to share their love. Not everyone accepted, but they soon learned that the power of God's love outweighed the hatred in their minds. Your words of faith and strength are powerful and I am always drawn to what you write. thank you for sharing your inspiration and your spiritual thoughts. Smiles as always, Carol

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
    Carol,
    Thanks again for another outstanding review, six star rating and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Hugs...Portia
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
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The way of Life - Jesus is the Way to Life. Thank you for this wonderful and powerful poem. I am a tribal from North East India and I feel proud of my heritage. God created us in His image, let us worship God. Thanks for writing and sharing this amazing poem.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
    Kitbok,

    Your words ring truth; "Jesus is the Way to Life."

    Thanks once again for another great review, six-star rating, and very kind comments.

    Bless you, my friend...Portia
Comment from Teri7
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Portia, I wish I had six stars to give you for this wonderful poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive and so true words with great scriptures. Thank you so much for sharing. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
    Teri,

    Thanks again for another fine review; your very kind comments, love, and blessings mean a lot to me.

    Hugs...Portia
Comment from Wendy G
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You are right - His love is perfect, and His ways are perfect too. There is no discrimination of persons with God - all are equal and loved. Man's heart needs renewal - by Him - in order to remove hatred and prejudice and replace these with His perfect love. Well written!

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
    Wendy,

    Thanks again for another great review and words of wisdom; they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings, my friend,

    Hugs...Portia
Comment from dragonpoet
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Portia,
This poem tells us a truth by which we should all live. Kindness and acceptance should be the rule. You're question about changing race and seeing if it changes your actions and beliefs is an intereting one.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
    Joan,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    I pray you are having a wonderful and blessed day.

    Hugs...Portia
reply by dragonpoet on 25-Jun-2021
    Don't mention it, Portia.
    Same to you.
    Joan
Comment from Senyai
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Hi PHarp.

This poem is a masterpiece and I felt the love pouring from your marvelous words. If we all could live by these words of truth then all of our troubles as a nation and world would be 95% solved I dare say. Thanks for posting such an honest and forthright verse that I had the pleasure to read. It was refreshing and uplifting!

Also I thought your image of the bridge was perfect to show the way God has plans for our lives if we would just follow.

Have a wonderful week,
Senyai

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
    Senyai,

    Thanks so much, my friend, for another fine review. Your comments are uplifting, and your support a blessing.

    Hugs...Portia

    Hugs...Portia
reply by Senyai on 28-Jun-2021
    Hugs back at ya, Portia! :-)
Comment from nomi338
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God had a definite reason for creating men to look different. Only one who loves God enough to obey his commandments to love fellow as though he were your brother, or neighbor. When Jesus told the parable of the good Samaritan, the same message was being taught. Do not hate someone because he looks different, speaks another language, or is from another place. You cannot love God whom you have never seen and be hating the brother you see every day. It does not work that way. When you do this, you bard the doors of heaven from which your blessings should flow. The lesson is, the things you get from Satan the Devil are temporary and he will be taking them from you shortly so that he can give them to the next fool that aligns himself with the Devil.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
    Nomi,

    Thanks so much for your review and wise comments.

    Blessings...Portia
reply by nomi338 on 23-Jun-2021
    Bless you my sister and keep writing, I enjoy reading your fine work.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Compelling and thought-provoking--a fresh twist on the theme of faith--this would have made a unique contest entry. Intriguing to contemplate your question!

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
    Elizabeth,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings...Portia