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well beyond (for Irene)

a 5 7 5 poem

3 total reviews 
Comment from Begin Again
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Wouldn't it be wonderful if the entire world could live together, letting each body of life thrive on who or what they are. An awesome thought! smiles to you - Carol

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
    Thanks for the review. Yes a bit more compassion for all living beings. I wanted my mom to know that I was feeling strong and happy that day, cheers, j
reply by Begin Again on 19-Apr-2021
    Good for you! Smiles, Carol
Comment from Chris Fruge
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I enjoyed this piece and felt you described a confident narrator setting out on an adventure full of confidence and optimism, which I believe, based upon your comments, was your intent.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
    Thanks for the review. Just want her to know that I am feeling strong. Cheers, j
reply by Chris Fruge on 19-Apr-2021
    You?re welcome m
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I enjoyed your 5-7-5, it is inventive and forward thinking and we all have to venture out into the world at some stage and make the best of life, I adore the picture you chose for your words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
    Thanks for the review Dolly. Yeah that is Raoul D'Hermental's artwork. I use it alot. Cheers, j