well beyond (for Irene)
a 5 7 5 poem3 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Wouldn't it be wonderful if the entire world could live together, letting each body of life thrive on who or what they are. An awesome thought! smiles to you - Carol
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
Wouldn't it be wonderful if the entire world could live together, letting each body of life thrive on who or what they are. An awesome thought! smiles to you - Carol
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Thanks for the review. Yes a bit more compassion for all living beings. I wanted my mom to know that I was feeling strong and happy that day, cheers, j
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Good for you! Smiles, Carol
Comment from Chris Fruge
I enjoyed this piece and felt you described a confident narrator setting out on an adventure full of confidence and optimism, which I believe, based upon your comments, was your intent.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
I enjoyed this piece and felt you described a confident narrator setting out on an adventure full of confidence and optimism, which I believe, based upon your comments, was your intent.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Thanks for the review. Just want her to know that I am feeling strong. Cheers, j
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You?re welcome m
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your 5-7-5, it is inventive and forward thinking and we all have to venture out into the world at some stage and make the best of life, I adore the picture you chose for your words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
I enjoyed your 5-7-5, it is inventive and forward thinking and we all have to venture out into the world at some stage and make the best of life, I adore the picture you chose for your words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Thanks for the review Dolly. Yeah that is Raoul D'Hermental's artwork. I use it alot. Cheers, j