Bye Bye Biggie
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Tick Tock Kill The Clock"Young love and old wounds revisited.
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Gripping! Stunning imagery earns your stars in itself: like a lopsided sandcastle to be washed out to sea with the evening tide ... wry humor: I would sacrifice a year of my life to see again. Make that two years.
Shocking ending is spot-on. Looking forward to more.
Zees=>Zee's unofficially adopted daughter.
anything else [zee=>Zee needs].
Upper[hyphen]crust educated.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Gripping! Stunning imagery earns your stars in itself: like a lopsided sandcastle to be washed out to sea with the evening tide ... wry humor: I would sacrifice a year of my life to see again. Make that two years.
Shocking ending is spot-on. Looking forward to more.
Zees=>Zee's unofficially adopted daughter.
anything else [zee=>Zee needs].
Upper[hyphen]crust educated.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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You?re the best. Thanks for all the help. Zee
Comment from Ulla
Hi Lin, that must be absolutely hell to live through. I can't even begin to imagine it. But what I can imagine is the reactions of the characters here to the situation. I understand their anger and frustration in response to the situation. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Hi Lin, that must be absolutely hell to live through. I can't even begin to imagine it. But what I can imagine is the reactions of the characters here to the situation. I understand their anger and frustration in response to the situation. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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I may have spent too much time on how it felt waiting. I don?t do well with books-chapters. My comfort zone is a flash fiction, one off story. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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I don't think you have. It's just right. The agony is for all to feel and see. I'm on my last few chapters of my book, and things has to be fleshed out a bit more in a book or novella as, we the reader, get to live with characters of the story. You are doing very well.
