Comment from Karen Estep

Excellent

Creepy, and well written, my friend. You accomplished sharing a story in three short lines, and it had a scary effect. Your graphic certainly set a tone for your writing. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021

Thank you for the read and encouraging feedback.

Comment from Gina Schneller

Excellent

Super cool. It's a short story in three lines. Lol. As a reader I was left hanging in suspense. Thank you for sharing your writing with us all. Best of luck in your writing journey.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021

Thank you for your review and encouraging feedback.

Comment from Carla M Horne

Excellent

Perfect image to accompany your poem. Your choice of "lurked" adds to the impending doom. Plus, the matter-of-fact ending adds to the shock. Good poem!

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021

Thanks for your read and your positive feedback.

Comment from Kerry L Batchelder

Excellent

Riveting, frightening and scary. You nailed it on creating a sense of danger and horror. The mirror illustration complements your writing. Very good wording.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021

Thanks for your read and your positive feedback.