The Russian roulette
Honesty15 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
I can't I completely understand the plot of this short story. It seems as if a confident person has to operate in a world of political correctness, where there are people (sharks) waiting for him to say or do the wrong thing, and then his feelings are hurt, or maybe someone else's. I think.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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I can't I completely understand the plot of this short story. It seems as if a confident person has to operate in a world of political correctness, where there are people (sharks) waiting for him to say or do the wrong thing, and then his feelings are hurt, or maybe someone else's. I think.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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You actually have captured in your review the exact essence of this story.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
You are brave to play Russian roulette. I won't. To be honest (Since you mention honesty) I like the picture and the words a little bit better than the fiction.
Your writing is excellent and is good for this contest. It should be one of the winners.
PS; Is politly a typo?
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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You are brave to play Russian roulette. I won't. To be honest (Since you mention honesty) I like the picture and the words a little bit better than the fiction.
Your writing is excellent and is good for this contest. It should be one of the winners.
PS; Is politly a typo?
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much and I lost:)
Comment from rindy ryan
Your title got my interest. But I'm not clear on the story line. This is more a chapter sketch in my opinion than a story with character, plot, and setting. I need to know where you have come and who the we is and what the conflict is about. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Your title got my interest. But I'm not clear on the story line. This is more a chapter sketch in my opinion than a story with character, plot, and setting. I need to know where you have come and who the we is and what the conflict is about. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Startling piece--not sure where you're going with this--intriguing imagery nonetheless--spot-on: circling politely/poltically correct game!
Yup, [I=>I'VE] come, I've seen, but did I really [won=WIN]?
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Startling piece--not sure where you're going with this--intriguing imagery nonetheless--spot-on: circling politely/poltically correct game!
Yup, [I=>I'VE] come, I've seen, but did I really [won=WIN]?
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a terrible feeling to live among political correctness. It's like swimming among sharks or playing with the Russian roulette. I stay home every day with my husband so I don't have such feeling. I hope you the best.
Well done at expressing your feeling.
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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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What a terrible feeling to live among political correctness. It's like swimming among sharks or playing with the Russian roulette. I stay home every day with my husband so I don't have such feeling. I hope you the best.
Well done at expressing your feeling.
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment
