A Night of love
The liveliness of life.7 total reviews
Comment from kmoss
I love your beginning sentence. It really hooks the reader and provides great imagery! I still have more entires to read but this one is my favorite out of five so far!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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I love your beginning sentence. It really hooks the reader and provides great imagery! I still have more entires to read but this one is my favorite out of five so far!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Kmoss. There are 4 or 5 that I liked. :) I'm glad you liked mine.
Comment from Bill Schott
This sixty-word story, A Night of Love, has the proper word count and create# a metaphorical night of passion within the passing of lanes on the highway of life.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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This sixty-word story, A Night of Love, has the proper word count and create# a metaphorical night of passion within the passing of lanes on the highway of life.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Bill. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from writer723
I enjoyed your lovely poem. Your usage of vivid details really enhanced the images in my mind. The romantic element added a nice touch to the scenario. It painted a pretty picture.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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I enjoyed your lovely poem. Your usage of vivid details really enhanced the images in my mind. The romantic element added a nice touch to the scenario. It painted a pretty picture.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you. :) I'm glad you liked it, and thank you for the stars.
Comment from lancellot
So, someone had a drop top Caddy and it was decked out to attract the ladies. Mission accomplished with moonlight stop on inspiration point. And nature happened. Two became three.
Good flash.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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So, someone had a drop top Caddy and it was decked out to attract the ladies. Mission accomplished with moonlight stop on inspiration point. And nature happened. Two became three.
Good flash.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Yes, those were the days, lancellot. :) I'm glad you like it.
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful image, and a lovely and lyrical piece of writing, appealing to the senses. The coming of night heralds different activity from that of daytime, equally special. Good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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A beautiful image, and a lovely and lyrical piece of writing, appealing to the senses. The coming of night heralds different activity from that of daytime, equally special. Good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Wendy. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed reading your well-written contest entry, Mystery Author. Your words are filled with great imagery. I could see everything your mentioned. This poem has an underlying message of love beyond what is on the surface. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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I enjoyed reading your well-written contest entry, Mystery Author. Your words are filled with great imagery. I could see everything your mentioned. This poem has an underlying message of love beyond what is on the surface. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Jan. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from samandlancelot
I liked your surprise ending. There are lovers in every species, and they multiply.
Excellent flash fiction in sixty words.
Patricia
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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I liked your surprise ending. There are lovers in every species, and they multiply.
Excellent flash fiction in sixty words.
Patricia
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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What is life, if not creation, Patricia? :) I'm glad you liked it.
